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Shower Dream
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�P He U Mo No Ultra Microscopic Sili Co Volcano Co N Io Sis� *(' ;')* A Andy Challenge I could not resist...sit back and dream....and Shut - Up No talking ...only nice people are allowed to review this one...lol!!! ***************************************************** "Shower Dream" Pulling me up from nowhere Next to your silken bare skin Eternal passion Untamed desire started to grow Millions of little sparks started to fly Oh� so unaware of evil lurking Not a single red rose or a satin heart around Only two people totally in love Under a moonlit sky** Loves rebirth so very fine Time passing�memories made Remembering a special moment in time After the blue lilies had fallen Maiden� heart imprisoned for life In gentle touch hands entwined Caught a look in your eyes that enslaved my soul Reached the most deepest core Only heavenly love was conceived so quietly So now it must live forever silently Continue to grow within our hearts Once more guided by an erotic dream Passionate love so sweet Intimate words spoken in a whispering song Come live with me and be my life Suddenly reality slapped me in the face I was just day dreaming yet again Lifting my hands to soap my hair In pain washes away the tears Come to me in the silence of the night One more time within my dreams Voluntary repeat if possible Oh dear soul Lay my head upon your chest Closing eyes in contentment Asleep between strokes of love through the night No interruptions from the outside world Only love and sleep�and dreams of love Carefree one more time Our love comes alive No more tears or loneliness to come our way It may not always be so�but Only once more guide us Silently back into this dream so sublime It felt so good Such a shame it was just a bloody dream Copyright � 2005 Tinka Boukes

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on April 3, 2005

What's in your water? Gimmeee some.

Ron

Reviewed by George Jackson

Reviewed on April 2, 2005

A stunning, absolutly wonderful poem.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on April 1, 2005

Yeah, I'll say it's a shame that it was just a dream too because it's wonderfully romantic. You created beauty from Andy's monstrous challenge. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Sue Hess

boy andy's challenge has brought some great work and this is one of them...it is such a strange word to inspire so many good poems

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Tinka,

A heavenly, steamy, gorgeous, divinely perfected write ... shear eloquence for the senses - your best to date my wonderful friend ... Bravo!!

Blessings,

Robert

Reviewed by Dale Clark

But a sweet dream and so beautiful.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

WOW, Tinka! Little Andy's challenge really inspired you - and what a marvelous poem this is.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Tinka...Now everybody that reads this is going to rush back to bed to see if they can conjure this dream for themselves!
Grand write!

Lisa

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 31, 2005

Okay Andy!!

�P He U Mo No Ultra Microscopic Sili Co Volcano Co N Io Sis�

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VVVVVVVVVVVV For You!!

One more time within my dreams

"Voluntary repeat if possible

Oh dear soul

Lay my head upon your chest"

Love Tinks

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

a lovely, romantic dream....

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Glad I didn't win, who would want to go out with Ed K...oh damn I should have kept my trap shut, as I am usually NOT a nice person...Ed

Reviewed by jude forese

a sensuously, refreshing dream ...

Reviewed by Michelle Mills

Now that's a DREAM! Great job Tinka!! Love, Michelle

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Oh Tinks you did great, but alas you fail.
Reapeat if possible should be a V...

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Better luck next time...Next please..

No hunks in America..only in GREAT Britian..

Very well done Tinks, I never thought anyone could do it..

You and sue have done grand..

First prize..A night out with Ed K.
Second prize Two nights out with Ed k..

Reviewed by Dave Harm

This would be a dream, worth going back to bed for!

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

A good way to light up the evening Tinka and yes doesn't it just tick you off to find out it was a dream.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

sensuous read

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Excellent! Love it! So sensuous, emotional, brings smiles and the saddest part disappointment but brings hope and desire. Beautiful! such a beautiful poem and dream
Thanks Tinka
I like this. Alot!
Tracey (c:)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Fantastic response and you deserve a reward! Tell Andy what you want
maybe he'll send you a "hunk" from New York!;-)(I'm being nice;-)
Great one sis!

Eileen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

You know what they say, )whoever they are) dreams can come true. Wish a little harder, dear.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

That is just so beautiful Tinka...extremely passionate.

Paul;-]

Reviewed by George Carroll

Splendid soft erotica in a dream beneath the sheets.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Absolutely Fantastic, Tinka! You certainly lived up to the challenge. I'm still trying, its not easy! A passionate fantasy that I share with you...

Reviewed by J. R. Corbin

sigh**
Guess who needs a shower now...a really cold one! This was exquisite...ty

Reviewed by Tiana ~ (Reader)

Absolutely beautiful, Tinka!
"Caught a look in your eyes that enslaved my soul"
took my breath away! Beautiful!

Loves rebirth so very fine

Time passing�memories made