Broken Trust { 2 } (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Duke LaRance

Reviewed on June 26, 2005

This is more of the same that we've come to expect from you. Great writing! -- duke

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 26, 2005

emotively powerful poem!

Reviewed by Mark Mahoney (Reader)

Reviewed on June 26, 2005

Powerfull write Tinka, very strong indeed, well done...Mark x

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 26, 2005

The tears of a lonely woman
maybe that'll be my next post title

William ......Peace & Love

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

excellent pictures in your words

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

Trust those instincts, Tinka. Wishing you grace, wisdom and guidance.
Best,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

Another heart breaking write Tinka, hope you find peace and happiness soon.

Peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Handsum Hart

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

Sounds like a dilemma of the heart.
Best wishes on stopping the cry.

Peace

Reviewed by Nordette Adams

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

You've truly penned a tense and heartbreaking scene here, Tinks.

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

Tinks my heart goes out to you chuck I hope all will be well soon.

Paul:-)

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

very intense scenario you've written here.
You really capture the passion of the heated moment
and the love of sensual real feeling love making,
Your poems are love in the making
and this one is outrageous too.

Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

Ohhhh TInk I can feel your pain in this one and wish there was a magic word to make it all disappear but pain as love is the nature of life. Well written and presented poem Tinka.

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

Such bleeding words, Tinks! I hope you'll recover yourself very soon....

We lost ourselves at one time or another,
but the main reason that we all survive afterwards is that
we are all capable of regaining ourselves at the end.
Hope it will not be a long journey until you come to the place
where you'll find yourself waiting there for you.

Love,

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

Your poems are from a bleeding heart that I hope and pray is healed soon from this on going misery.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

Excellent poem of what infidelity causes!
I hope and pray you find a better way, Tinka!

Eileen

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

((((((((((((((((((((HUGS)))))))))))))))))))))))) and prayers!

Aww, this is so sad, Tinks! I hope you have better days ahead; you are in my prayers today!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :(

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 25, 2005

Sometimes that old warning bell we have inside of us does its job and alerts us to danger and heartache. Of course we don't always heed it. Good