DISTORTED (poem) by Tinka Boukes on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2006

A most powerful write! Well done. Holly

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Life is a distortion of the original blueprint...
Well done, kudo's to you both.
:)Ch'erie

Reviewed by William Haynes

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Very engaging, tell one individual you have an apple and by the period the story returns you have a bushel.
bill

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Oh my ! You two have bent distorted into an even more disfigured word with this poem!And what increidible visuals! Superb collaboration!

Eileen

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Tinka & Dennis;

What an unexpected place to walk into! The two of you have accomplished an Uncommon work here..it calls you in, while pushing you away at the same time! Therein, lies the two distinct thought patterns! And then, add the graphic... Outstanding!!! Applause!!! Hope you two work together again in the future.

Love&Hugs&Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by S J (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

"DISTORTED" is truly intense and deep!
Great piece Tinka & Dennis!

Thank you,
Sheila

Reviewed by Aberjhani

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Brilliant fusion of philosophical insights with gritty emotional expressiveness. Art and words fit a very dynamic way.
Aberjhani

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

The world is in a chaotic state. You express this well here, TinkaSweets. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

enjoyed the read

Reviewed by J M (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

This one is different Tinka but then the world is distoreted do you not agree. Wonderful thought provoking piece and art...

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Wow! Got my attention...this is a very clever write and also true one, the truth does somehow often get distorted and how often the truth has been taken to the grave for those left behind to never know...wow this puts much thought on one's mind. Great write very captivating.
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

A demented, twisted, crooked, insane, grotesque,and sweet piece for sure.

Ron

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Intense and impassioned write that took me by surprize especially combined with the graphic. Not your usual but very very good.

Fee

Reviewed by m w

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

WOW, my head hurts now... great pic with poem, work together very well

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Firstof all the art work stunned me to study or and then the deep poen. How do you create this dual masterpiece?
love,
Susan

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Ah...how often the truth is 'distorted'. We look at our world through carnival mirrors...

Chrissy

Reviewed by CJ Heck

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

A fine accomplishment, Tinka and Dennis -- you work well together. This is excellent -- compliments galore!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

this poem externalizes internal strife in a most cohesive manner ... not easy to do when two distinct minds and sets of emotions collaborate ... well done!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

talk about imagery!!! great work!

Susan

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Well I am relieved this was a poem written by two people. For a moment you scared me, almost gave me hickups :) Victor

Reviewed by Rusty Daily

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Boy-o-boy, there are so many great lines in this poem I couldn't pick a favorite. This is one imaginative piece of writing Tinks.
Thanks for posting
Hugs
Rusty

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

I hope it doesn't last too long..
Scary picture....

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Plaster of Perish is a terrible tool, and this is quite a somber poem, you two.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

May your thoughts never be as gruesome as that pic from hell Tinky-Doll.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Very eloquent truth, dear Tinka.

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on October 22, 2006

Tinks

Quite a strong feeling of discontent mirrored in this introspective collaborative pen..

We have to break free from the inertia in our lives sometimes, and that takes courage and fortitude from us..

Go to it gal !

Love

Peter