When the sun goes down on me To embrace my ocean blue Just to disappear From horizon far Then my heart sink To deeper levels too Because its time to go To dream a dream or two Then the sun rise for you And a hard days work You have to do On the other side Of my ocean blue
ah my friend...one of the things I love about your verse is how you take intimate experience and present it as if it were my own....you are a gifted wordsmith lady.
Very beautiful offering of a longing but warm heart. Distance is a factor that amplifies the aching & yet brings out the best in us when we can relate it so well as you have done here.
Amor
Beautiful view of your poetic thoughts
And a very nice sun rise displayed with
A stunning panoramic painting of the ocean and the sun
Enjoyed this piece very much!!
Love And Peace to You Always...Morning star
You are one of the Dens most resilient romantics Sissy.
You always touch my heart, because your struggles, although personal, are shared by so many others. Full blossoming consistent love between two is so bloody difficult to attain. Keep hoping and wishing dear Tinky Doodle. Love from yur friend and big bro!
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And a hard days work
You have to do
On the other side
Of my ocean blue"
Very cool!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
"On The Other Side ~ 217"
Romantic loved the poetry and the graphics.
Thank you for sharing Tinka,
~Gwendolyn
Peace&Grace,
Sharon
Amor
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Be well,
Michael
To dream a dream or two
And I hope they are very pleasant ones, Tinky.
And a very nice sun rise displayed with
A stunning panoramic painting of the ocean and the sun
Enjoyed this piece very much!!
Love And Peace to You Always...Morning star
Well Penned
Love Your ocean ans sea poetry
Peace be with you
Love & Peace
William
Blessings,
JOyce Bowling
Love,
Susan
Heartfelt and beautiful. I loved it!
Many Blessings,
~Linda
Art Sun...
You always touch my heart, because your struggles, although personal, are shared by so many others. Full blossoming consistent love between two is so bloody difficult to attain. Keep hoping and wishing dear Tinky Doodle. Love from yur friend and big bro!
Light and Wisdom ...
Fee
Chrissy
Love and a hug,
CJ
Time means nothing to a peaceful ocean my friend. Beautiful poem and melody.
enjoyed
Regards
Dai
would do without the ocean.
Glad you have it. We just
have big lakes..
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