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Emotions So Deep
by Tinka Boukes → (All Poetry by Tinka Boukes)
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Emotions So Deep

It is not only a dream
It’s a lifetime that separates us
Fear deep inside
It touches each emotion inside me
I am stressed
It’s far too deep to hold back
The edge is coming closer
And I know I am in trouble
I am too weak to make it to the shore
And I can already hear the waters
That will take me down… down…down
I try to hold on tight
Hold on in every possible way
Just to let go again
Because the streams are to many
It is like a whirlpool
It is far too strong
It forces me back to the shore
I am too tired
The edge is coming closer
And I know I am too damn emotional
I am too tired to make it to the other end
And I can already hear
The water fall’… down… down
And deep down… I cry


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 Reviews of "Emotions So Deep"
Reviewed by Daring Sunshine
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
Interesting picture yet poem is really sad. Hope for a brighter tomorrow_you write so beautifully, Tinka!
Peace&Grace,
Sharon

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
A very sad heartfelt write my friend,put your floaties on and keep on writing,If i can swim in shallow water than so can you...Be positive,nothing negative...
God Bless,

Michael

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Tinka,

Even in the agony, you promote the beauty.
Great music and graphic selections also!
Outstanding, Poetess..
Love&HUgs, Rhonda

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Such a superb piece of prose,my friend! Full of deep
Beautiful emotional indeed and excellent
Tone within the lines.
Very powerful write my friend I truly Enjoyed
Reading And Reviewing this Beautiful piece!!
Love And Peace to You Always....Morning Star


Reviewed by David Young
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Wow, this is deep in a lot of ways, very powerful.

"'And deep down… I cry'"

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Emotional poetry well expressed Tinka.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Beautiful as always, dear one.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Beautiful writing on such powerful emotions, Tinka...touches the soul
love and peace,
Carole~

Reviewed by Chrissy McVay
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Makes me want to sit by a stream! Lovely.

Chrissy

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Very beautiful write Tinka. You have captured despair exceptionally well.
Rusty

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
Hold On, Tinky - Better Days Ahead!

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Oh, Tinka, this gripped me!

Reviewed on March 16, 2007
O, (((Tinka))),

Your words flow like tears from your pen to my heart--you're in my prayers. Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
deeply emotive, Tinka ... but that's what i expect from you ...

Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Tinka,

Powerful emotions in your words today; hope you are okay! Very well done; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :(

Pray for me; disability denied; have to fight to get it! GRRRR!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Very deeply touching poetry Tinka, that penetrates the brain cells, going round in circles.

Eileen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
A powerful write my friend, and one of much depth...beautiful and very emotional indeed! Enjoyed! As always your work is a pleasure to read...enjoyed the music very much, a soothing tune!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Ah...don't cry. I enjoyed this.

Thanks,
~D.

Reviewed by Pamela garner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Wow! I know all to well how it feels to ride that emotional ride. With my divorce, and lost a dear loved one this paints a vivid pic of how I feel. But it's poems like this and friends like you here at the den that help pull me through.I can't thank you enough for this beautiful poem.
Love and thanks again
Pamela

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
You expose so much of yourself in what you write Sissy. I can imagine that this outlet helps keeps you healthy. Powerful! Love from big bro. Beautiful sound byte.

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
what is she holding on to?

Reviewed by m w
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Your poetry is your release Tinka. You are stronger than you think. You are in all our prayers. Its okay to cry, tears are salty and they will keep you bouyant... hugs

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Enough Of The Emotions Keep On Writing It Out...If You Don't Care How Can I Anybody Else...If More People Learn To Cry Yell It Out...
Here's a HUG...

TRASK

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Awww, this is so sad, Tinka. It's hard to ride the emotional roller coaster, sometimes, I know. Thank God those feelings aren't there all the time and we can tuck them back away.
Love and a big hug,
CJ

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Such a moving write Tinka, God Bless you as you continue on to share despite, love holly

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Oh Tinka this is sensitive and terrifying at the same time, I know sometimes though that we all feel like that, the good news is that we are lucky to have such good friends here on the den to offer us lifelines when we need them.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
The swirling vortex, yes. Very well sketched, Tinks, in both emotional and pictoral terms. Think sometimes we just have to let it loose and go with the flow, don't you? Atdemo, I'm finding that to jump is surprising... having let go of the fear, I am possibly both sinking with grace and swimming with dignity and new-found self-awareness. Does that make sense? Probably not, but I got a lot from this poem. Be well, Sweetheart. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Full of emotion, which is your trade mark.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Taylor (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Wonderful work, Tinka.
You wring emotion out of every syllable.

Love,
Elizabeth

Reviewed by Pier Tyler
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
This is vividly pulsating. So moving...

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Tinka! Great depth in this dramatic poem! Very well expressed!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Don'tforgettheworldcupcricketisonyou couldgetrunnersupafterwewinit.....

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Wow, you better watch the edge?
Can I throw youa rope?
Very intense write..
x0x0x00x


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