It is not only a dream It’s a lifetime that separates us Fear deep inside It touches each emotion inside me I am stressed It’s far too deep to hold back The edge is coming closer And I know I am in trouble I am too weak to make it to the shore And I can already hear the waters That will take me down… down…down I try to hold on tight Hold on in every possible way Just to let go again Because the streams are to many It is like a whirlpool It is far too strong It forces me back to the shore I am too tired The edge is coming closer And I know I am too damn emotional I am too tired to make it to the other end And I can already hear The water fall’… down… down And deep down… I cry
Interesting picture yet poem is really sad. Hope for a brighter tomorrow_you write so beautifully, Tinka!
Peace&Grace,
Sharon
Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
A very sad heartfelt write my friend,put your floaties on and keep on writing,If i can swim in shallow water than so can you...Be positive,nothing negative...
God Bless,
Such a superb piece of prose,my friend! Full of deep
Beautiful emotional indeed and excellent
Tone within the lines.
Very powerful write my friend I truly Enjoyed
Reading And Reviewing this Beautiful piece!!
Love And Peace to You Always....Morning Star
A powerful write my friend, and one of much depth...beautiful and very emotional indeed! Enjoyed! As always your work is a pleasure to read...enjoyed the music very much, a soothing tune!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Wow! I know all to well how it feels to ride that emotional ride. With my divorce, and lost a dear loved one this paints a vivid pic of how I feel. But it's poems like this and friends like you here at the den that help pull me through.I can't thank you enough for this beautiful poem.
Love and thanks again
Pamela
You expose so much of yourself in what you write Sissy. I can imagine that this outlet helps keeps you healthy. Powerful! Love from big bro. Beautiful sound byte.
Your poetry is your release Tinka. You are stronger than you think. You are in all our prayers. Its okay to cry, tears are salty and they will keep you bouyant... hugs
Awww, this is so sad, Tinka. It's hard to ride the emotional roller coaster, sometimes, I know. Thank God those feelings aren't there all the time and we can tuck them back away.
Love and a big hug,
CJ
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Such a moving write Tinka, God Bless you as you continue on to share despite, love holly
Oh Tinka this is sensitive and terrifying at the same time, I know sometimes though that we all feel like that, the good news is that we are lucky to have such good friends here on the den to offer us lifelines when we need them.
The swirling vortex, yes. Very well sketched, Tinks, in both emotional and pictoral terms. Think sometimes we just have to let it loose and go with the flow, don't you? Atdemo, I'm finding that to jump is surprising... having let go of the fear, I am possibly both sinking with grace and swimming with dignity and new-found self-awareness. Does that make sense? Probably not, but I got a lot from this poem. Be well, Sweetheart. LOL Kate xx
Corporal Travis dreamed of partnering with a police dog, but Fate handed him a faery and something unexpected instead.. As his normal world spirals into chaos, he is thrust into a centuries-old conflict with stakes higher than he ever imagined.
Peace&Grace,
Sharon
God Bless,
Michael
Even in the agony, you promote the beauty.
Great music and graphic selections also!
Outstanding, Poetess..
Love&HUgs, Rhonda
Beautiful emotional indeed and excellent
Tone within the lines.
Very powerful write my friend I truly Enjoyed
Reading And Reviewing this Beautiful piece!!
Love And Peace to You Always....Morning Star
"'And deep down… I cry'"
love and peace,
Carole~
Chrissy
Rusty
Your words flow like tears from your pen to my heart--you're in my prayers. Well done.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(
Powerful emotions in your words today; hope you are okay! Very well done; brava!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn. :(
Pray for me; disability denied; have to fight to get it! GRRRR!
Eileen
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Thanks,
~D.
Love and thanks again
Pamela
Light and Wisdom ...
Here's a HUG...
TRASK
Love and a big hug,
CJ
hugs
Fee
You wring emotion out of every syllable.
Love,
Elizabeth
Can I throw youa rope?
Very intense write..
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