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Castle Of Dreams
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*Castle Of Dreams* *In Collaboration with* *GUESS WHO?* Within the castle of our dreams The debris of the past still floats The walls of insecurity need to be washed To eliminate all that trash from within We need to re-arrange some furniture And decorate those dark thoughts Within the castle of our dreams Old memories need to fade away To allow new ones to elate each day Within this castle of OUR dreams Only words of love to be spoken Like an avalanche to flow Beneath the warmest sunrays of love Slipping from the chambers of our hearts Warm and tender�deep A falling refrain Two hearts together in harmony Words of love that will be spoken With meanings real and not just token No more pettiness or something phony This will be our testimony Past debris has left our side Like flotsam on the ocean wide Our dreams one day will all come true Because of me, because of YOU Within the walls of our castle keep Eternal love runs so very ....deep Copyright � 2007 Tinka Boukes and Walt Hardester Sandie May Angel-Joyce Tinks and Walter: This collaboration is so lovely. I also love the painting as well. Castle of Dreams is fascinating!!! Sandie May Angel :o) Regis (Reg) Auffray A lovely collaborative offering, Walt. Thank you for sharing it. Love and peace, Regis Lady J talks Nicely put together. great picture. Lady J Randall Barfield That's the only kind of castle I want to tour/visit one day. Thanks for posting it. Cheers Abdi-Noor Mohamed Beautiful Beautiful. This is extremely beautiful, romantic and heart-warming poem. Thanks for this wonderful offerig Barbara Smith Tinka & Walt, a great write of a love stronger than a raging sea, but differences pulled you away from each other. I mulled over this a tad because in my heart of hearts, once respect is lost in a love, there's really nothing but possibly the memories of the passions you two once shared is truly all that is left. Would it work once again, once the two of you are together for a while and the flicker starts to flicer again? Jean Reeves How beautiful the pen flows from two very loving hearts indeed. Jean Karen Vanderlaan so very well put here-beautiful write: The debris of the past still floats The walls of insecurity needs to be washed To eliminate all that trash from within High Country Girl That castle will need some renovations...but I see you two have those plans well in hand....:) All smiles, and ATB to you both. Excllnt write here Love Ch'erie Taylor Ryan I love the message you two have penned. You've put your marks on what is important and what isn't and should be put aside. Romance is the winner here and so are the two of you. New beginnings, fresh starts, and love...can't beat it! xo Taylor Rose Rideout A fantastic collaboration shared by you two, I can tell you both work very well together. I love it. Thank you for sharing. Newfie Hugs, Rose Felix Perry Wow you two are doing like the old days when we had phonograph records...putting hits on one side and flip side both..well done fee E T Waldron Bravo! A collab that uplifts love to where it should be and gives us an example to follow. Fine work from you two! Love, Eileen Southern Comfort A beautiful Love Offerin by my two favorite people! LOVE YA'LL Sissy Tinka Boukes Thank you Walt for sharing this special offering...we did well here..if I must say so myself!! Knowing it came from two people that knows what hurt can do and also what love can do too!! A treasure to behold!! Love Tinka Karen Palumbo A very lovingly, beautiful masterpiece you two have created with this poem. It just flows love everywhere, great work....... Be safe, Karen Jennave Coz Beautiful work you two...Talented construction I dare say ! I wish you well.Jen Kathy Armijo A castle with strong walls to keep out all the ugliness, and to protect the love that's growing inside. "Because of me, because of YOU" -- a fitting tribute to your love of one another. So very tender. Kathy La Belle Rouge A beautiful poem of love. Michael Guy A nice and useful(!) collab from you two serious poets! Good words to live by for anybody! Thanks Dale Clark Great collaboration! Bravo! Jerry Bolton Hey! THIS was good, you two . . . One of the better poems I've read lately . . . You got it all together here, with the emphasis on "making it work" you drew up the blueprint . . . Gotta love it Holly Hamilton (Clapping) Bravo to both of you, excellent job beyond words. When you two write your first book of poetry I'd like the first copy! No kidding! love Holly Karen Vidra , The Texas Tornado Walt and Tinka, What can I say, but...W O W!! Very well done; bravo! brava! (((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D Georg Mateos The walls of that castle should stop the poisoned arrows that always will be thrown at happiness. Another great collaboration. Georg Ted Bossis Such a glorious gathering.........love both - TedSo Karla Dorman The StormSpinner Walt and Tinka, STUNNING collaboration of verse and image: well done! (((HUGS))) and love, Karla. Happy place, indeed! Ann Scarborough I agree with Mr. Ed. A wonderful poetic collab! Annie Rebecca Lerwill Walt, so nice. I'd call that my happy place! R~ Mr. Ed Old memories need to fade away To allow new ones to elate each day Out with the old (especially the nasty ones), and in with the new! A wonderful poetic collaboration, and intriguing graphic, from you two!

Reviewed by Charles Keller

Reviewed on October 2, 2007

Impressive effort. Sweet, poignant and positive message.

Reviewed by chris stienstra (Reader)

Reviewed on September 30, 2007

Beautiful collaboration. Wonderfully written by two masters of the pen! You both pen words that flow from the heart. This work is magnificent....
My very best to both.
Chris

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on September 29, 2007

I can see why SO many commented on this beautiful piece of writing,
Tinka.
It is one of your best!

Reviewed by David Young

Reviewed on September 27, 2007

So much flowing emotion of a writer's pure talent.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Exquisite write and so moving as i read between
The lines it sounds like a love that is beginning to flower
Excellent collaboration
Your building a beautiful Castle Of Dreams
That could be a realistic!!
Love Peace and many hugssss...Morning Star

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

A literary flower and a literary bee giving us the honey of a poem.
Thank you both.
Georg

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip

Catharsis! Beautifully done, Tink.
Love and {{{hugs}}}},
Leland

Reviewed by G Yale (Reader)

I know that this will come as a surprise - but this has great depth.
-The debris of the past still floats. This is a thought provoking line.

The poem could have stood on the first stanza alone.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

This was very good on Walt's page; even better with this music, Tinky!

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Tinka/Walt

Outstanding piece of poetry. Cleaning out the cobwebs of the past and making room for tomorrow.

Reviewed by Walt Hardester

Reviewed on September 26, 2007

Tinka, thank you for allowing me to add to your wonderful work, and yes, We did do good. Even if I must say so, our collab shines like the stars. Makes me proud of US both.
Love,

Walt

Reviewed by Rose Rideout

Tinka I just told Walt that you and him do beautiful work together , I loved every word in every line. Thank you both for sharing.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Has a fairytail feel

Reviewed by Carin Spirit

This is Beautiful. Thank you, I needed this.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Beautiful, just so esquisite! So moving as you stream from one verse to the next bringing it all together in a woven fabric of love....

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Stunning my friends...a great collaboration and the choice of music is excellent...bravo to a fine duet!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by E T Waldron

I read it on Walts site,you two have truly done a magnificent poem that puts love in the higher realms where it belongs!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Like two stars riding paralell orbits you two always come together to create a super nova of a poem...well done,

Fee

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Wonderful friendship that benefits us all because it brings with it twice as much talent. Hooray!
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Great write from two of my favorite co-conspirators for the TRUTH
that sets you free indeed! Beautifully written. Rock

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo

Is this poetry or love in bloom?

I'm hoping it's love cause I do like a nice romantic ending/beginning.

Kathy

Reviewed by Southern Comfort

So very beautiful and blissfully romantic! Truly SIGH WORTHY! LOVE YA'LL SC

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Wonder-filled indeed within these walls -love * TedSo

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Wonderful write, Tinka and Walt; you two make quite a team! Very well done; brava! bravo!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :( (Feelin' sad today)

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)

Dear Tinka, why haven't you got another book of poetry out? This is so uplifting and so bloody good. I already commented on Walt's site, and think you two have done a marvelous job! Love Holly

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Read this under Walt's name, Tinka, what a write! Beautifully penned, I need this happy place today. :(

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

You two make beautiful poetry together.