On A Journey
I was accomapied
By two friends of royalty
With Kingdoms of their own
Bordering nations of My Kingdom
On a clear cold night
We stopped to rest
Our weary bodies, to eat
And seek warmth
awaiting the arrival
Of tomorrow's sun
The dark velvet heavens
Sparkled with millions of stars
One bright star
stood out more pronounced
Her tail twinked downward
Almost touching the ground.
~*~
It attracked our attention
Until we fell asleep
Mysteriously
At the same moment.
An Angel appeared to me
Within a dream
Said onto me
"The Child was borned"
On this Silent Night
Follow that bright star.
I woke my royal companions
Repeated the Angel's message
Without questions
We packed our camels
Proceeded to follow
the bright star
Which led us, to a barn
Sleeping peacefully
In a straw filled manger
Laid "The Child"
We came to honor
~*~
I placed by his feet
A gift of gold
That was purchased
For my wife and daughters
The other Kings offered
Gifts of aromatic incense
And sparkling jewels
With feeling of cleansed souls
We departed taking secret routes
On our return trip
To our beloved Kingdoms.
This is a piece of the story I had not heard before, I never knew/or had forgotten how the wisemen came to follow the star. This is a wonderful poem, William. I love it and will be saving it to my library. Thank you. Merry Christmas to you and yours.
Take care,
Sherry
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on December 24, 2006
Just so wonderful,Enjoy your holidays...Hugsssssss
Reviewed by Miss Pandora (Reader)
Reviewed on December 24, 2006
Simply exquisite William - very clever and how beautifully you remind us of what this season is all about. Love and the best of wishes for the holiday season. Panda :)x
I bow to you, William. This was very cleverly written from the viewpoint of one of the kings. Excellent poem. I enjoyed the perspective.
Love and Happy Christmas,
CJ
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on December 23, 2006
Quite original to write the poem of the three King from the point of view of one of them. Outstanding poem. Victor
Your thoughts through the traveled time into the past and seen through the present make for a glorious view of the coming ....Of The Lord....nicely written ...
Beautiful and I loved the point of view that you've written it from my friend, very inspiring what a beautiful journey you've taken thte readers on. Wishing you a Merry Christmas and blessings from the mountains of Kentucky.
Joyce Bowling
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A delightful story of a needy family of squirrels who are kicked out of their village, because of their tattered clothes and nests.
Abandoned and in search of friends to accept them, they travel many roads of r
Love Tinka
Take care,
Sherry
Merry Christmas a blessed 2007!
Joselyn
love and peace, Carole
Love and Happy Christmas,
CJ
And a Merry CHRISTmas to You and Your family...
Art Sun...
Great write!
Love and Peace be with you this Holiday Season...
and A Happy New Year!
Kimmy~
Joyce Bowling