AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  James Harvey, iEdward Patterson, iMargaret Mullings, iMORGAN ST. JAMES, iErin Kelly-Moen, iMartin Treon, iLisa DAnnolfo Levey, i Aberjhani, iJay Dubya, iJeff Mason, i

  Home > Nature > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Susan K. de Vegter

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 1,234 Titles
· 15,476 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Before 2003

Susan K. de Vegter, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



A Great Storm
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
   Rated "PG" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook


Poem Artwork

You sense when a great storm approaches
It rambles and shakes from the floor
Feels like horses stampeding
Just nature marching once more
The awesome drips that are speeding
Like bullets when rain hits the roof
Its hard to quiet your heartbeat
When drops are like horses hooves
They seem to be chasing their shadows
The shadows being the clouds
The darkness of forces approaching
Thunder that threatens...out loud
Flares of natures ambition
Feeding the earth with such force
Spears of light...ammunition
Threatening us all on her course
Marching like Sherman she broaches
The marshes that lead to the sea
Afterward calming her creatures
The animals, birds and then me
The calm after she leaves us
Its heaven smitten with greens
Limes and colors of emeralds
Washed over and smelling so clean.

© 2004 Susan K.de Vegter

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "A Great Storm"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 11, 2006
Most outstang....great write!!
Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 10, 2006
Images of storms past conjure in my mind.

Ron

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on March 10, 2006
What a great capture Susan. You have the storm caught for all time in this poetic beauty!A gem!

eT

Reviewed by Henry Lefevre
Reviewed on March 10, 2006
Hi Susan:

So beautiful and so true.

The worst storms that I've seen came to visit me in Panama. They didn't have any tornados, but they sure had fierce thunderstorms that rumbled and grumbled for what seemed like hours.

Hank

Hank

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on March 10, 2006
You can visualize and almost smell the freshness and tang in the highly charged air in this atmospheric and dramatic pen Susan !
I have never witnessed storms like the Texan storms I saw last summer, where you had fork, sheet and radial lightning occuring at the same time, with monsoon like rain cascading down !
Peter

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on March 10, 2006
Phew, I can almost feel the force of your storm over here on the other side of the pond, susan. What a great photo, too!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on March 10, 2006
Magical word images that almost make the reader want to see the storm through your eyes.
Felix

Reviewed by rite
Reviewed on March 10, 2006
Mages in proto-Sumerian times were capable of manipulating thunder (http://www.aelives.com/gods.htm look under Baal). But like Bono of U2 sang some time ago already: 'You're an accident waiting to happen. You're a piece of glass left there on the beach' Mankind, through the brilliant spirit of Nikola Tesla (who detested war himself), has rediscovered the 'art' of waging weather war. Even the sensitive animals will receive no forewarning of such artificially created events. Yet these powers in the hands of arrogant and ignorant entities is dwarfed by the power of the Light.

RAge

Reviewed on March 10, 2006
Susan,

WOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You put the StormSpinner to SHAME! What a grand poem, strongly imaged--and felt! The first two lines grabbed me and wouldn't. Let. GO! LOVE IT!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed on March 10, 2006
Lovely imagery in this powerful write, Susan; very well done! Enjoyed; thanks for sharing~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


New Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter
Popular Poetry (Nature)
  1.  Four Seasons
  2.  'Malama Ka Aina'...
  3.  Summer Barbecue
  4.  Finding Peace
  5.  Robin's Return
  6.  The Sea Bird's Life
  7.  Where The Redwing Sings
  8.  O Harvest Moon
  9.  Such Simple Occurrence
  10.  The Rose In My Garden
  11.  Contra-time
  12.  Flower's Power
  13.  Moonlight on Water
  14.  Nature's Tonic
  15.  Moon Shadow
  16.  Mountain Rivers
  17.  All the Little Things
  18.  Wildwood at Sunrise
  19.  Black and White and Beautiful
  20.  All of Us Together
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Where The Redwing Sings by Mr. Ed

A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow. This book won 'The Poetry Category'  
Member BookAds

Terrorforming Your Environment by RickthePoetWarrior

Never to leave well enough alone our attempts at managing our society, culture, and environment are recycled, re-used, and just generally regurgitated  
Member BookAds

The Mysterious World of the Human Genome by Frank Ryan

Your genome lies at the very core of your make-up. This book explains it for readers who know nothing whatsoever to start with.  
Member BookAds