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Mystic Marsh Haze
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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I lived on the marshes of Sunbury, Georgia and I will always cherish the happiness I found there.


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In the mystic haze of morning
With the call of a passing Loon
Just when the night is over
When the outline of the moon
Is blending into daylight
Still haunting all the same
It comes as the tide rises to full
Pure nature, raw, untamed.
The shrimp hopping in silver
Threads of phosphorous light
Spot Bass as they roll
Bullets of flashing light
Tails clicking a whisper
A swish, a plop, a splash
Just ahead of danger
As the shrimp make a final dash
Then in the reeds, stealthily
Looming just beyond site
The king of the marsh birds stalks his prey
Waiting for his first bite
His eyes chase shadows in shallows
Then just when the timing's right
His neck is a lighening fast trigger
When the morning captures the night
Breakfast for creatures of nature
Foodchain that balances out
The call of hungry stomachs
As marsh mornings wake up and shout!

© 2003 Susan Kathryn de Vegter

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 Reviews of "Mystic Marsh Haze"
Reviewed on February 13, 2007
I so want to be thereeeeeeeeeeeee, My dream before I am 6 ft under
Is to be in/near the EverGlades!
I love this
Your imagery I could see and feel it all~

Shrimp is my Yummy favorite, in any creative way their is... Ever simmer Anchovies with garlic / EVOO and shrimp till Opaque... Mmmm... 2 die 4 ~

WArmly, Warrior Sheeeooxx

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
Beautiful self portriat. I love the marshes because they are always teeming with life, like your poem.

Ron

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
You have taken me to this place Belle-a-Shugga, and I have felt its power and the olfactory has been accosted by the smells. Spreading wings in anticipation I have become one with the writers imagination. 2003? Wow!

Light and Wisdom ...

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
My My
What a sunrise
There's nothing compare's to freshly caught shrimp.
As is this poem.
DWB

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
Awesome penning Susan!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
So visual, such lush imagery

The shrimp hopping in silver
Threads of phosphorous light


I can see the little suckers!
love your picture selection as well, a woman of the earth........
stunning!
oh yes, and I like your new bio pic :)
pax A

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
This is beautiful, Susan -- your story is woven with wonderful imagery, allowing your readers to 'see' through your words. Excellent poem!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
great imagery and familiar to some of us. good read and thanks for sharing it. luck

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
Pure nature, raw, untamed.

How marvelous that is, as is this poem, Susan.

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
Great scene, makes me wish I am present there. You captured my imagination. Victor

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 12, 2007
Such a strong impression of life and nature in an area that in itself is so secretive in guarding the beauty of its wonders. You always capture and take the reader on a ride that leaves them spellbound at the beauty of the places you describe. Thank you for giving us who cannpt travel such wonderful trips.


Fee

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on February 11, 2007
captivating imagery brings to life this alluring and intriguing marsh ...

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on February 11, 2007
You should do a book of nature writes Susan! You capture every aspect so intimately it is pure joy to read! Another keeper!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on February 11, 2007
I really liked your snapshot of life. beautiful

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on February 11, 2007
In my mind this beautiful picture of the marsh,now i'm ready to eat some shrimp,Thanks,Well done,
Michael

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on February 11, 2007
Wonderful images of a time and place close to your heart.


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