There is not a sprig of grass that shoots uninteresting to me.
The sky was so blue today
Invited doilies of clouds to play
The humid conditions stepped back
As seagulls took up the slack
Then Terns screeched and dove
Like the many high roads
Of play before the day turned to black
Then evening shadows like shades
Pulled down for the end of the day
As hyper paces slowed down
The shadows reached for the ground
Then silence was broken
When whispers were spoken
Faint heartbeats were earth's only sound.
This is really a super write Susan. When I read the title I thought of the doiliesthat my grandmother would make and when I related them to your sky in the poem...the beauty truly connected...well done
Allen
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Don't suppose I'll ecver look at a beautiful sky with the same old lackluster feelinga again . . . Very nice, Susan . . .
Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.
Ron
Love Tinka
What a beautiful day,
Kathy
Love,
Eileen
bravo :)
Allen
Fee
well done...
John