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An Invitaion to Doilies
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
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There is not a sprig of grass that shoots uninteresting to me.


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The sky was so blue today
Invited doilies of clouds to play
The humid conditions stepped back
As seagulls took up the slack
Then Terns screeched and dove
Like the many high roads
Of play before the day turned to black


Then evening shadows like shades
Pulled down for the end of the day
As hyper paces slowed down
The shadows reached for the ground
Then silence was broken
When whispers were spoken
Faint heartbeats were earth's only sound.

copyright 2007
Susan Kathryn de Vegter


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 Reviews of "An Invitaion to Doilies"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on September 17, 2007
Peacefully beautiful. Strong personification.

Ron

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
beautiful write with such a positive air

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 16, 2007
Wonderous beauty!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
beautiful atmosphere ...

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
"... doiles of clouds ..." covering the sky. As one who enjoys crocheting, the imagery is intoxicating.

What a beautiful day,
Kathy

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Exquisite and eloquent writing Susan! A splendid read!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
magical and picturesque.........I saw the scene as I read
bravo :)

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
This is really a super write Susan. When I read the title I thought of the doiliesthat my grandmother would make and when I related them to your sky in the poem...the beauty truly connected...well done

Allen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Don't suppose I'll ecver look at a beautiful sky with the same old lackluster feelinga again . . . Very nice, Susan . . .

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Fantastic brush strokes of color highlight the scene you just painted with the eye of an artist. Beautiful Susan...beautiful.

Fee

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
...the days turn...quietly handed over to night...
well done...
John

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on September 15, 2007
Sensitive hour glass - love * Ted


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