AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Flo Fitzpatrick, iLloydene Hill, iFrances Altman, iJ. Allen Wilson, iValerie Boggess, iMargot Dillard, iJay Dubya, iWilliam Potter, iFrank Whyte, iDavid Schwinghammer, i

  Home > Nature > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Susan K. de Vegter

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Sponsor Me!
· Articles
· Poetry
· News
· Stories
· Blog
· 1,234 Titles
· 15,476 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Before 2003

Susan K. de Vegter, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



A Monarch Afternoon
by Susan K. de Vegter → (All Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter)
   Rated "PG" by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

For Karla.


Poem Artwork



I stopped my car just yesterday
On a whim of natures play
I walked up to a railed fence
With an eye...so content
The traffic whizzed...I never budged
My eyes were glued to the loop and dodge
The orange and black of dizzy wings
The smell of flowers...hints of spring
The breeze of February...promised warmth
This woman who would do no harm
She rested here upon my finger
I edged her closer...still she lingered
The magic of a friend in flight
The soul to spirit...what a sight
We called upon this silent vow
To trade a smile for a fuzzy bow
Just me and she...this one of magic
Her flight of fancy dodging traffic
My wish to travel where she goes
Her wings so still upon this rose
I gave her time to rest from flight
She gave me friendship...eyes so bright
How many ME's does she see or feel...
Is she with comfort...is this all real
The colors vibrant, her need to dance
The miracle spoken with silent chance
We stayed glued for half an hour
A raindrop came and then a shower
I placed her under the rail fence
I left her there and off I went
This time was special for she and I
My wishes are hers when she flies
I'll always recall this wonderment
This Monarch afternoon I spent
When nature trusted me again
With a butterfly and a new friend

© 2006 Susan K.de Vegter



Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "A Monarch Afternoon"
Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 21, 2007
Wonderful personificatiom. I'd say the Monarch was attracted to your perfume.

Ron

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on October 9, 2007
Monarch's catch everyone's attention. You caught the beauty of them and their majesty in this poem.

Kathy

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
"The magic of a friend in flight" ... indeed the same applies to the poet who shared in it ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
A monarch afternoon - delightful!

Reviewed by John Leko
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
...lightness of this pen...has given me wing...of ones royal friendship.
John

Reviewed by Edwin Larson
Reviewed on October 5, 2007
Beautiful write Susan. Funny how when we stop and take a breath the connection is always there...had a moment like that with a dragonfly the other day...The smallest things do give cause to our place in life I guess.

Edwin

Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Beautiful write, Susan; very well done! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

I digress: not ALL the monarchs are in Georgia--saw one today here in Texas; flew above my head! Karla missed it! :)

Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Susan,

Thank you for dedicating this beautiful Monarch poem to me; I am honored. Now I know where they are! With you!! LOL :) Well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Enchantment in poesy drips from your magicical pen with this lovely encounter! Karla has to love it!;-)I do!

ET

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
The orange and black of dizzy wings

They are beautiful, aren't they......

Walt

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Filled with beauty-----love Ted

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 4, 2007
Damn near had this old crusty bastard bawling by the time I got to the emd . . . Beautiful . . .


New Poetry by Susan K. de Vegter
Popular Poetry (Nature)
  1.  Four Seasons
  2.  'Malama Ka Aina'...
  3.  Summer Barbecue
  4.  Finding Peace
  5.  Robin's Return
  6.  The Sea Bird's Life
  7.  Where The Redwing Sings
  8.  O Harvest Moon
  9.  Such Simple Occurrence
  10.  The Rose In My Garden
  11.  Contra-time
  12.  Flower's Power
  13.  Moonlight on Water
  14.  Nature's Tonic
  15.  Moon Shadow
  16.  Mountain Rivers
  17.  All the Little Things
  18.  Wildwood at Sunrise
  19.  Black and White and Beautiful
  20.  All of Us Together
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

Where The Redwing Sings by Mr. Ed

A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow. This book won 'The Poetry Category'  
Member BookAds

Where The Redwing Sings by Mr. Ed

A book of nature inspired poems and essays, written from the heart and soul of a life-long nature, animal, and wilderness lover, and dedicated to today’s children - Earth's only hope for a better tomorrow. This book won 'The Poetry Category'  
Member BookAds

Songbirds and Roses (paperback edition) by Aberjhani

Explore the mystery of how nature makes unexpected gifts of creative wonders to an unsuspecting caregiver one late night and early morning in southeastern Georgia, USA.  
Member BookAds