Upon My Roof...Light Footsteps (poem) by Susan K. de Vegter on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on April 18, 2008

I can always tell when it's going to rain.
I smell it coming.
I can always tell when love is just a read away
I look for your name
Another great title.
Doug

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

... so soft and tender, the warmth here evaporates it into the beauty of the morning mist that weaves its way into everything. As detoxing and refreshing; as cosseting and stimulating as a sauna, Susan. Now to find the cucumber slices for my eyes... in the hope that love might nibble them away! :)) True SKdV stuff. Kate xx

Reviewed by Ted Bossis

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

clearly your sense of beauty is back in-tact .~. evol smaerd _ TedSo

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

The heart of the poetess overflowing with love and gratitude. Touches the heart Belle, this superb metaphor.
Blessings ...

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Don't you love when rain go on discrete? just tiptoing over the rooftops with that delicate tap dancing following the deep bass drums of the far away thunder...

Georg

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Oh sweet first rain of Springtime
Amore ' come to call

Lovely, Indeed!

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

Yes, like love, rain does bring forth new life.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on April 17, 2008

What can I say . . . Broome has said it all . . .

Reviewed by F William Broome

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Now, I KNOOW that Susan de V is back, and is in rare and romantic form! No one writes like you do, allowing our everyday gongs to be touched like that of a lover and in feeling the loving ! ! ! This is magnificent. - Bill

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

mmmm..this is a beautiful gratitude to spring

Reviewed by Pierre Ortega

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

This poem is magical, I love the way you equate passion with spring.

Love, Pierre

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Ahh this is sublime loving in romantic mode, Susan! A beauty!...ET

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

beautiful imagery and motif ... emotively superb ...

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

there is nothing more cleansing or spiritually refreshing as the rains of spring.A wonderful expression of spring, rain, etc

Reviewed by Randall Barfield

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

This is a nice one. The opening 4 lines are hard to top. Thanks for posting.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

This is such a beautiful poem. enjoyed

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Good to see you posting again and not at all to see such a lovely and magical write as this being offered as a gift to your readers. Lovely indeed. Welcome back dear friend.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Very relaxing imagery in this write Susan. Peaceful and serene. Very well done my friend. God bless.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on April 16, 2008

Another one the StormSpinner wishes she'd penned - sublime, Susan, well done! Again, the image is as beautiful as the write.

(((HUGS))) love and prayer, Karla.

Hope you're feeling better soon.