It’s a slow burn
a deep ache
a never-ending need
always pushing me forward
like a fierce wind
in a wildfire
propelling my sails
moving me closer
and closer to you
It never stops
and I see no reason for it to
‘cause I love that feeling
of always wanting you
In the burnt aroma of our yesterdays
That, would thereon a sunset sea, set sail,
Heed so the westward winds of our endeavours
That we may too, those helping winds prevail.
This is positively locomotive, Sara... heady, in some marvelous way as it rolls along, picking up steam. The poetry gives it beauty, the style and form makes reading it a treat. I love the ending. It's where I hoped it would go, but spoke it in a newer, more clever way. Good stuff! katy xox.
This is so powerfully emotive and so well written--follow the currents to love. :) BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on February 23, 2005
I can relate, Sara. It is such a sweet hurt that it almost feels like what we want Heaven to feel like, but there is also that sweet/sour pang of a devilish streak that makes it all the more delicious. Maybe?
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soft and forward motion
enjoyed
That, would thereon a sunset sea, set sail,
Heed so the westward winds of our endeavours
That we may too, those helping winds prevail.
Morchuis
I can relate!
But as Oscar Wilde said "the only way to deal with temptation is to yield to it"
best
Ian
Take care Girl!!
Say Hi to the "invisible" visible...lol!!
Love Tinka
Eileen
This is so powerfully emotive and so well written--follow the currents to love. :) BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :)