Eggs over light,
sausage, home fries, wheat
toast, marmalade,
coffee black:
Monday ritual at the South Jersey diner.
Outside the window in the morning fog,
Route 30: a narrow river,
Crabtown River,
my river; me
a skinny boy of thirteen
paddling his homemade kayak,
slicing the water pretty as you please.
At the point the muddy river empties
into Chesapeake Bay,
an oyster boat appears low in the water,
Uncle Williard at the helm,
heading home;
and in celebration of the day’s haul,
two crew members swing me into the bay.
I surface leaning on the star-
board rail of a navy destroyer escort,
dolphins racing us into Okinawa's harbor.
At the scream of a kamikaze that barely misses,
the dolphins disappear…
I’m alone on the Jersey boardwalk
studying the sea, counting
the waves that break and ripple to shore.
A noisy gull lights on the boardwalk;
we discuss things.
I too, have always been able to lift myself out of the fog banks of the past by meandering beside the calming whispers of the ocean tides and by watching the seagulls who have the audacity to start and then to resolve their questionable squabbles with one another so easily. There is much to be learned from time spent lost in the solitude of a seaside stroll. I truly enjoy your writings. Thanks for sharing. Shay
Memories are beautiful & also unforgetable as your creative express is also very reflective of this life we all share with similarities & differences too.
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
T h a n k . y o u for letting me ride along. Took me there, my
friend! Wonderful writing! So rich in imagery!! Like a breath of fresh air. . .in Jersey, yet! xOx 'Pea' xOx
Gene - A pleasant surprise to run across your site. Loved Breakfast at the Diner and how the poem plays with time. You gave me more than I expected. Especially liked the part about the thirteen year old being dumped in the bay to:
...surface leaning on the star-
board rail of a navy destroyer escort,
dolphins racing us into Okinawa's harbor.
At the scream of a kamikaze that barely misses,
the dolphins disappear…
You're on my tracker and I'll be back to explore more. - David
You are making me so homesick that I am going to have to make a trip home this summer just to inhale the ocean air! So vivid, clear and precise right down to the greasy spoon diner's food. Keep them coming.....
Kinda hard to add to what 'nessa' said; I agree totally with her review. You took us on some marvelous reminiscing, Gene; thoroughly enjoyed! I'll have some crisp bacon rather than sausage, 'tho, thank you :o)
Blessings ~~ Micke
Reviewed by blue soplain (Reader)
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
....egads; this has the brevity of photographs grainy and beautiful....a wistful, immediate poem. .. . so full, yet so longing. ..
i wish i could write as this....personal, sojourner....wayfareing. . .
such power and beauty in your voice.
nessa
Reminds me of a little diner here in my hometown of Jamestown, where my Grandfather spent many breakfasts, before we lost him to Leukemia in Sept of 86, thank you for sharing
God Bless
Michelle!
I tend to always call gulls that land close to me, Jonathon, as in J. Livingston Seagull and from there we start to converse...like the ocean they are very good listeners aren't they...Ed & Rufuz
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Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
friend! Wonderful writing! So rich in imagery!! Like a breath of fresh air. . .in Jersey, yet! xOx 'Pea' xOx
...surface leaning on the star-
board rail of a navy destroyer escort,
dolphins racing us into Okinawa's harbor.
At the scream of a kamikaze that barely misses,
the dolphins disappear…
You're on my tracker and I'll be back to explore more. - David
Be always safe,
Karen
Blessings ~~ Micke
i wish i could write as this....personal, sojourner....wayfareing. . .
such power and beauty in your voice.
nessa
God Bless
Michelle!