Hi Gene, one would believe that you paint. I'm certain you do, by the texture of this beautiful wee poem. An artist often gets lost somewhere between the brush and the canvas. Truth exists somewhere in there and you express it well.
J'nia, the artist
Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2008
You have taken my breath away with such beauty written here on this page...breath taking sweet Gene.....sighhhhhhhh..be well and always safe ...Hugsssssss
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxo
Gene,
This is appreciation and celebration of all artistic process, a painting of physical intimacy, the creative sexual act...."raw rhapsodic movements" all the way to the "jasmine kiss".
Beautiful approach and concept.
John
lust upon the artist's canvas -- deftly "the uninhibited brush" accommodates the avenue to climax, with a "jasmine kiss" -- but only when properly, "steeled at the nexus" --hue and brush never provided me with such a delight -- though many deft strokes, "crimson lines" and daubs I have artistically applied to a milky white canvas -- guess I need lessons -- this is great Gene -- it will keep me now forever more alert at my easel! -- peace and love to you my friend --JMW
I sense that the artist/narrator in "art appreciation" is so into creation that it is more powerful than a man and woman having sex leading to orgasm. Dare I say that such moments for artists take place when one merges with the art. Eventually he steps back and glows with satisfaction as if he'd had an orgasm that almost gave him a stroke because the final product of the craft he has nurtured with love/hate is so glowing on that canvas that it is like the internal fire of the sun. Isn't it true that artists can lose themselves in their creation--almost merging with the page; the canvas; the music.
Magnificent imagery Gene. You have a masterful way of illustrating with your words. The figure you sculpted is true art. I am amazed.
Rockie Coppolella
Christmas When Music Almost Killed the World is a novel in which nothing is quite what it seems and everything is loaded with shadowy dreams of the past and nightmares set to soul-pounding music of the future.
This is book 2 of my new fantasy trilogy, The Twins of Moon. As Quimbre warns Eefa, 'No world is more riddled with secrets than the eldritch waters we now blithely sail.' Here in the Sea of Stars the twins discover their extraordinary true destiny.
Regis
J'nia, the artist
Love Always,
Chanti Lace xoxo
Eileen
Sandie Angel :o)
This is appreciation and celebration of all artistic process, a painting of physical intimacy, the creative sexual act...."raw rhapsodic movements" all the way to the "jasmine kiss".
Beautiful approach and concept.
John
"concupiscent rhythms' - it's a great image.
Myrna
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
nicely done,
stan
Rockie Coppolella