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casino outcasts
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a haiku sequence.

 
beneath the boardwalk
fragments of winter’s debris
shelter the homeless

discreet bag lady
crouching behind a smudge pot
counting the day’s take

in the chill lamp light
two derelicts exchange drinks
and conversation

strung-out teenager
looking older than his years
tries to warm his hands

no one notices
when the old whore lifts her skirt
to relieve herself
 
 

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 Reviews of "casino outcasts"
Reviewed by Lloyd Lofthouse
Reviewed on February 1, 2009
Wasn't it Ronald Reagan (Ray Gun) that said America did not have any homeless? Just came back from Watching Slumdog Millionaire. I wonder how long before America's slums look like the ones in that movie? ‘Casino Outcasts’ vividly reminds me of someone standing by an American freeway off ramp looking through the window at someone riding inside a BMW or Mercedes and the one looking in sleeps on the streets. The window, probably bullet proof, stays up and there is no eye contact.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on January 29, 2009
A view of the sadder part of life maybe...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce
Reviewed on January 27, 2009
What a sad life for some. I always sympathize with the unfortunate people. I always wondered what it was when they weren't on the street; what have they done to cause them there.

I wish the government would help these street people and give them a roof over their heads...at least. No one deserves to be on the street.

Sandie Angel :o(

Reviewed by Juliet Waldron
Reviewed on January 26, 2009
"Masked and Anonymous"...not a word out of place. Thank-you, Gene.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on January 26, 2009
Stark and real, these are fine haiku, Gene. Thank you for sharing them. Love and peace,

Regis

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Gene - enjoyed this sequence that fits together so well. The last stanza is perfect.

no one notices
when the old whore lifts her skirt
to relieve herself

Though it holds its own as a literal image, it also takes on the aura of myth, an image of life.

David

Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on January 25, 2009
Bleak and powerful writes, Gene. You see the dark side, the underbelly, of today's world. And what a tragedy life can be for so many in our capitalistic selfish culture.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
Enjoyed the way you presented this excellent sad poem, made me think of,

stories long untold
lives disappearing thru cracks
existing shadows

Carole~

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
A sad tale, indeed, and there are far too many outcasts today.

Reviewed by F William Broome
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
Tis is a lesson for your friends; how to write haiku graphic drama! Your words come thru so real, I could smell the smells of the place. Top-notch writing and imagining, Gene. - Bill

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on January 24, 2009
Gene...yes, sad...but so so well done.

Reviewed by xxxxxxx cccccc (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2009
such impact

Reviewed by Gerard Gauthier (Reader)
Reviewed on January 23, 2009
This is the hard edge, a place our eyes fail to find...humanity slips off the globe...Great read x4 Gene

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on January 23, 2009
a sad tale Gene -- when I think of the people in this world that need help, I am appalled that most people do not think of the residents of the United States -- our new administration is looking for ways to fund a $1 trillion dollar donation to the United Nations to help end world poverty -- I say let us care for our own first -- your poem speaks to the long road of pain many travel in their lifetimes -- people at every level on the financial scale are subject to these same woes -- "but by the grace of God, go I" -- peace, love and great joy to you my dear friend -- JMW

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on January 23, 2009
..too sad, though under the boardwalk they are better protected from the elements than living on the street in a cardboard box...though actually, none should be living on any street as this country has the wherewithall to provide housing and sustenance...but what do i know...Ed

Reviewed on January 23, 2009
Oh Goodness!!
No-one chooses the path of nowhere left to turn, the loss of dignity...Your words speak volumes in so few lines about many streets, alley ways...
the "casino outcasts"...gambling oneself into poverty is also a true reality...
I seen an elderly fellow in this grocery store who needed a serious shower, I didn't realize till I seen him sneaking to put potatoes in his coat that he had no place to clean up. It's so sad....
Much Love & Inspirations To You
Vickie

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on January 23, 2009
So true. I've worked with the homeless and understand their plight. Wish it would end one day.
Blessings, j'nia

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on January 23, 2009
Sad and so often I think of those forgotten Gene. It tears my heart out. Thank you for sharing.

Newfie hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on January 23, 2009
Oh Gene this is so sad...the totally forgotten...tears for this heart touching write my dear friend and sadness untold. Love and hugs, Bonnie


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