She was a wilted Flower (poem) by Lily of Lough Neagh a.k.a C. Dennis-Woosley on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 17, 2014

Your verses awaken meaning, thought, and emotions, Carol. This is a very compelling poem - most expressive. Love and best wishes to you,

xo Regis

Reviewed by Dark Knight

Reviewed on March 6, 2013

Love this Poem

Reviewed by Laura Fall

Reviewed on March 5, 2013

Oh my such touching poetry that sure touches the heart!! Laura

Reviewed by Gert van Weenen (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2013

The fragile petals of her heart are crushed under the harm done to her. But she's not broken, just bent and she will always love again. Although she's a wilted flower, she has lost nothing of her beauty, no one can ever take away the beauty of her heart.

My heart is full of emotion and tears are in my eyes while I write this.
I love you Carol, you're beautiful

Reviewed by S Bergerac (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2013

To even imagine dear Lady Lily that you life goes unfilled is hard to believe. You prevail though as stated here from your loving heart.

I bow and tip my hat to you

Cyrano

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone

Reviewed on March 5, 2013

When you realize that you love someone more than you love yourself, that is when you need to step back and re-examine the relationship. You definitely are on the path toward pain and loss.
Sometimes one needs to suffer this kind of loss in order to learn from it and become a stronger person.
Beautifully done my dear friend!

Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Diane Miller (Reader)

Reviewed on March 5, 2013

An exceptionally sad poem even though the circumstances did not deter you from continuing to give your love.

Di

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on March 4, 2013

Water with love a
"wilted flower"
and watch it grow
giving back...

Thank You *Lily*
for the hope...

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 4, 2013

Well lets see, I don't particularly love the self, so I guess when I lost my dog Rufuz, that was a very bad time for me & I still dream of him every so often...e

Reviewed by Gail D (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2013

You have sacrificed a lot in your life, I understand your pain and hope you find everything you need.

Gail

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)

Reviewed on March 4, 2013

Carol, Your poetry uplifts our souls, Makes us weep, Has us look at our mirrored lives, Gives us a feeling of completeness, You take us where you have been, and we listen....Your writing is compelling and we are very lucky to have you on AD....

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

Reviewed on March 4, 2013

what you have written is sad of one taken advantage of to early
budd

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on March 4, 2013

I have chills that won't stop! (and tears)

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

Reviewed on March 4, 2013

The photo! The poem! Sadness personified. There are those who choose to transfer their love which has been shattered unto those who are needful for the cusp of her love she offers.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 4, 2013

Beautiful poignant poetry that flowed evenly all the way through. Wish I could write like you. This is real poetry.

George

Reviewed by Ed J.

Reviewed on March 4, 2013

Such a sad poem. Beautifully penned.

STAY WELL and keep writing
Eddy