ANOTHER DAY ANOTHER DEATH MANY MOURN MANY FRET SO CONFUSED SO ABUSED FAMILIES TORN FAMILIES LOSE FUTURES SHATTERED FUTURES SLAIN ANSWERS FEW ANSWERS SHAMED TAKING LIVES TAKING SOULS HEARTS BLEED HEARTS COLD ASK WAR WAR WHY?
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Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2004
That is a good question. One we may never have a answer for. The purpose seem to have blurred and all we're left with is "when"
A question politicians are ducking these days. Strong write, Z. What Armstead said. ;-)
Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
The rhythm of frustration has a life of its own here in this write, Zenith, and you quietly pose unanswerable questions that lay deeply buried in the heart of the beast... well written!
A moving piece, Zenith. Frustration does truly mount. Sadly, it is often the case that the powers that be believe the lie that "might is right." Humanity remains enslaved by ignorance and cruelty; its evolution will remain stymied until these chains are broken. Nice work, POET!
Powerful poetry, Zenith!!! That question has been asked since mankind has taken up arms against one another. I think the only answer is because we have never learned to just love one another without conditions!!!
Wonderful composition of a succession of worthy thoughts that prove that the soul is still alive and beating to life's rhythm - and yet the mind is struggling to stay on top of the numbing sensation of a world gone mad... perhaps... but, maybe, just my take on this surgical write, Zenith. The linking repetitions make this a very powerful and observational poem, thank you... but I wince at saying "thank you" for a piece of art inspired by such sobering reality. Bless you, Z. Kate xx
~Z~ You know me as well through my poetry as anyone else does here, but I will spare you my thoughts on this subject and tell you I appreciate this poem more than you'll ever know. Thanks ~Z~, Lisa
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Zenith has there ever been peace? Loved the way you structered this
poem. It give it grat effect. Strong and prowerful words dear. Bill Murray
Why? It's a four letter word that starts with the second letter of the alphabet that has outgrown the White House lawn. That's my free speech commentary.
"War why not?". Greed answers
I think this all I can say as far as this question is concerned. I see and live with war in Sosmalia and everyday is another day of mourning, of fretting and bleeding. We can make this the best question of the year.
Thanks
abdi
Love our Enemies.
I just wish our foes
could get to these poems of yours.
Best wishes
Miller
~ Sandie May Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
love
Ian
Seems people have been at war with each other forever.
Maybe things will be different one day.
Peace and sunshine
HH
'ASK WAR WAR WHY'
I wish we had the answer.
Reindeer
Nicely done and thank you for visiting me also.
Hooves
well done!
Love Tinka
poem. It give it grat effect. Strong and prowerful words dear. Bill Murray
Carmen
Good to see you posting of late ~Z~, Peace, Ed & Rufuz (& thanks for your comments/reviews)
blessin's Z,
cynth'ya
I think this all I can say as far as this question is concerned. I see and live with war in Sosmalia and everyday is another day of mourning, of fretting and bleeding. We can make this the best question of the year.
Thanks
abdi
Font color sets it off well Zenith!!!!
Another day yes... Will it ever end?
lady Peg