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Why?
by Zenith Elliott → (All Poetry by Zenith Elliott)
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A moment of silence.......


 

ANOTHER DAY
ANOTHER DEATH
MANY MOURN
MANY FRET
SO CONFUSED
SO ABUSED
FAMILIES TORN
FAMILIES LOSE
FUTURES SHATTERED
FUTURES SLAIN
ANSWERS FEW
ANSWERS SHAMED
TAKING LIVES
TAKING SOULS
HEARTS BLEED
HEARTS COLD
ASK WAR
WAR WHY?


 

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Reviewed by Sage Writer (Reader)
Reviewed on December 12, 2004
That is a good question. One we may never have a answer for. The purpose seem to have blurred and all we're left with is "when"

Reviewed by Miller Caldwell
Reviewed on November 24, 2004
Replace War with Love
Love our Enemies.
I just wish our foes
could get to these poems of yours.
Best wishes
Miller

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on July 31, 2004
A question politicians are ducking these days. Strong write, Z. What Armstead said. ;-)

Reviewed by ***** ********* (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
The rhythm of frustration has a life of its own here in this write, Zenith, and you quietly pose unanswerable questions that lay deeply buried in the heart of the beast... well written!

Reviewed by Vincent Martin (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2004
Beautifully expressed...~DarkBard~

Reviewed on June 27, 2004
We asked the same question too everyday. I like the parade of words in this poem. The power of this poem lies between the words. Love this.

~ Sandie May Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Ian Thorpe
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
I loved the insistent rhythm of this powerful poiece Zee. Let's hope people remember to ask the question come November.
love
Ian

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on June 26, 2004
A moving piece, Zenith. Frustration does truly mount. Sadly, it is often the case that the powers that be believe the lie that "might is right." Humanity remains enslaved by ignorance and cruelty; its evolution will remain stymied until these chains are broken. Nice work, POET!

Reviewed by Handsum Hart
Reviewed on June 25, 2004
I would sure like to know why.
Seems people have been at war with each other forever.
Maybe things will be different one day.

Peace and sunshine
HH

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on June 24, 2004
Powerful question, shame few have the answer...great write...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 24, 2004
Yes it's a valid question.

'ASK WAR WAR WHY'

I wish we had the answer.

Reviewed on June 23, 2004
Excellent and powerfully felt, this was such an excellent poem,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Hooves Of Fire (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
This is so eloquent and could apply really to any killing or war.
Nicely done and thank you for visiting me also.
Hooves

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 23, 2004
I agree with Jude on this. Well done, Zenith. Love and peace to you. Regis

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Zenith...this is a very profound write...well done...Fletcher B

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
because we are still very primitive creatures ...

well done!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Powerful poetry, Zenith!!! That question has been asked since mankind has taken up arms against one another. I think the only answer is because we have never learned to just love one another without conditions!!!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Yes Why??

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Wonderful composition of a succession of worthy thoughts that prove that the soul is still alive and beating to life's rhythm - and yet the mind is struggling to stay on top of the numbing sensation of a world gone mad... perhaps... but, maybe, just my take on this surgical write, Zenith. The linking repetitions make this a very powerful and observational poem, thank you... but I wince at saying "thank you" for a piece of art inspired by such sobering reality. Bless you, Z. Kate xx

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
My thoughts exactly. Great write.

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
~Z~ You know me as well through my poetry as anyone else does here, but I will spare you my thoughts on this subject and tell you I appreciate this poem more than you'll ever know. Thanks ~Z~, Lisa

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Zenith has there ever been peace? Loved the way you structered this
poem. It give it grat effect. Strong and prowerful words dear. Bill Murray

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Good question, but I'm afraid few, if any of of us, will have an answer for it. Well done.

Carmen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Such an excellent message to the world of war...hope it helps, if it doesn't, then Why?

Good to see you posting of late ~Z~, Peace, Ed & Rufuz (& thanks for your comments/reviews)

Reviewed on June 22, 2004
A great emotional piece. Who have asked a timely question, WHY?

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
This is so true, Zenith! Powerful poem!

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Why? It's a four letter word that starts with the second letter of the alphabet that has outgrown the White House lawn. That's my free speech commentary.

blessin's Z,
cynth'ya


Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on June 22, 2004
Powerful message and excellent ryhme scheme make this one a joy to read. Great job.

Reviewed on June 21, 2004
"War why not?". Greed answers
I think this all I can say as far as this question is concerned. I see and live with war in Sosmalia and everyday is another day of mourning, of fretting and bleeding. We can make this the best question of the year.
Thanks
abdi

Reviewed by DB Prabhu
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
I wish warmongers' eyes open with such intense poetry...If wishes were horses....LOL

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on June 21, 2004
This is moving and so true.
Font color sets it off well Zenith!!!!
Another day yes... Will it ever end?

lady Peg


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