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The Mayfly
A tranquil scene in sight and sounds The river and banks where life abounds
The jewelled flash of Kingfishers wings And sunlight sparkling in dappled rings
These rippling waters gliding by Are so tempting to the young Mayfly
A cloud of water sprites who take a chance And upon these sparkling waters dance
The waters part in a rainbow hued flash Crystalline droplets falling with a splash
Showers of diamonds from glistening scales And the hungry trout’s leap rarely fails
When his sharp eye is upward glancing And he catches sight of the Mayfly dancing.
Jackie S Brooks © 20th May 2004
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These two lines stanza's are a delight to read. They have good rhythm and rhymes, flows well when read. Good job indeed.
~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~
Just love this one A1!!
Love Tinka
Well done!