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Critters!
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Critters!



This morning Jim said to me
"We are going to have to talk to our 'children'
about the critters they bring in!"


~


"Shrews and mice or a rat or two,
Just this morning Calli brought a bird for you."
Poor little sparrow died in my hand
Calli just does not understand,
Her feline nature dictates
She hunts by instinct, not out of hate.
Most of her captives live to go free
All she wants is praise from me.
It hurts me when a birds cries I hear,
This poor little sparrow just died of fear.
Shouting or scolding would do no good
Calli is only  doing what nature intended she should.


~


With soft words and gentle persuasion
She releases her captives to me, for liberation.
What Calli wants is my affirmation
And of her hunting skills, admiration.



Jackie S Brooks ©
27 August 2003


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Reviewed by Jaclynn Huntington (Reader)
Reviewed on August 28, 2003
This is precious! My folks had the same experiences.

~Jackie~

Reviewed on August 27, 2003
A superb write....wonderful realism

Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Hi Jacqueline:

I had a feline like that too when I was a kid. He always brought in the hunted, lay it in front of everyone's full view, and all he ever wanted was praises from us.

Wonderful write indeed!

Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Excellent write! You captured the spirit of the cat and owner perfectly with this write.

Reviewed by Cheryl Sellers
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
this is so good, I have a loving pet who too blesses me with his prizes.... I do understand why this child of yours brings you it's gifts of love

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Good write!!!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on August 27, 2003
Yes, above all else, allow your "children" to revel in nature's grand plan.


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