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Natural Art (“16 Candles”)
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“16 Candles” is a new short-verse form created by Joseph Randell Sherman (Joseph* ~ OneLight*®) in 2008. The simple format consists of four lines of four syllables each, unrhymed, with a nature theme.

 

White horse dashing
through thick, green vines
- a splendid glimpse
of Nature’s art.
-- © 2008 by Alexandra* ~ OneLight*®
(Inspired by Joseph’s beautiful white Lusitano horse, cavorting around a paddock behind one of our vineyards, this morning.)
 
 

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 Reviews of "Natural Art (“16 Candles”)"
Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on July 8, 2008
Four lines, sixteen syllables and an image to die for!

Thank You for creating and posting this wonderful example of my newest form.

Amo te muito,
Joseph

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 8, 2008
White dashing through greens, innocence playing hide and seek in the hope's forest.
Dashingly written!

Georg

Reviewed on July 7, 2008
Alexandra you are such a beautiful soul, all your poetry reflects it. Lovely image and mood in this one.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 5, 2008
Very nicely done Alexandra, I like the image this created that lingered serenely on my mind.
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on July 5, 2008
Instinctual -
Life expressing
Natures beauty
Surrounding us ...

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 5, 2008
Yes, a beautiful sight to behold indeed. I like white horses, and white cats too. With the green vines surrounding it must have been an artfully neat scene of art.

Reviewed on July 5, 2008
What do I think it? Absolutley divine - the image comes vividly to mind, a living painting - thank you, Alexandra! Beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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