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Reflection of the Aftermath
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That moment when you catch sight of yourself unexpectedly...


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The mirror checked me out today

It caught me unaware

The face I see

Staring back at me

Tells a story of despair

 

Upon first glance I’m shocked to see

The mask of love, undone

The face I see

Staring back at me

Is drained and overcome

 

It tells a tale of fear and woe

Where harmony be sought

The face I see

Staring back at me

Is weary, sad and fraught

 

The eyes are dull, there is no smile

The heart-break here is plain

The face I see

Staring back at me

Is full of grief and pain

 

Yes, the mirror checked me out today

I was shocked at my demise

Because the face I see

Staring back at me

I just don’t recognise.


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 Reviews of "Reflection of the Aftermath"
Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on December 20, 2012
As one who has done my fair share of "mirror" explorations in both my novels and poetry, I can attest to the power of reflections, be they from a manufactured ornament hanging on the wall, or the clone-like sense one gets from the quiet water's surface. As your poem reminds us of our ever changing outer wear and tear, it also signals we give our inner self the due it deserves. You've penned a simple and arresting piece of wordsmithing. Thank you.

Reviewed on August 21, 2012
I think most of us have experienced this at one time or another. You have penned it perfectly. May tomorrow be a better day with a happier face in the mirror.

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on August 19, 2012
the face can definitely reflect the state of the spirit ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on August 13, 2012
It's sad that you see yourself this way. From the pictures you post, I see a vibrant, happy woman who loves to write poetry. The sooner you stop beating up on yourself and start loving everything around you, the sooner you will feel free and happy.

I know, I've been there.

Ron

Reviewed by Donna Chandler
Reviewed on August 13, 2012
Well penned -- that silly mirror just doesn't know everything. :)

Donna

Reviewed on August 12, 2012
What the mirror sees is a reflection of the inner
turmoil taking it's toll on a very tired soul.

Hugs darlin'

Love and Light
Lily

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on August 12, 2012
what the mirror sees on the surface is temporary it is what is deep inside that makes us what we are in truth. the pain will pass and the you that is will return remember that.
budd

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on August 12, 2012
Even it it isn't an illusion, Ruan, fight back.


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