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Thank you to all who sent advice...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
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This is not going to be a poem, just a thank you for the advice you offered, you know who you are...Katy, Floria, Ed, Lisa, Bill, Anna & John...

Slept for most of the afternoon,
3 pm and temp is down a bit,
Needed to get up and eat something,
Chicken soup and gatoraid sounds great,
But Pizza and cherry coke is all I got,
I know, I know, if I am not,
Going to heed advice, why ask?
The problem being is, I live alone,
Going to the store when I am feeling ill,
Is not something I can just for it take a pill...


I really, really wanted to say thank you,
To the chosen few that advised me too,
I enjoy being yelled at by Katy,
Makes me feel loved by another wonderful lady,
John, per getting stung, the bugs are not out,
At least not yet, thankfully can put that idea to rest...


Chicken soup is a good idea too, I think I may have some even,
I don't like this feeling, even though there are times,
I had wished for it to come, for days off from work,
Now I am upset that I did, but live and learn,
So let me eat what I got, for now,
Later, hopefully I can find someone to go to the store,
Would send Rufuz, but he kinda scares the ladies there...


Again and one more time, thank you all, for your wonderful advice,
You are loved more than I can say,
As I fully appreciate your every way...


              *ED*


 


 


 


 


 


 


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Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
CHICKRN SOUP. THE CURE OF ALL THAT ILLS
PIZZA AN COKE SOUNDS KOOL TOO

wILLIAM

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
TSK.. TSK... Ed, I am not here, I am not commenting.. you're supposed to be in bed! Therefore, this isn't me, and I'm not reading.. BEHAVE YOURSELF! (grin) (How's that for yelling?!) LOL. Ok, the real me says: please take care and STOP posting things.. how can you get better if you sit and stare at the screen? Just have Rufuz warm you some milk (YUCK!) and tuck in til tomorrow. I have spoken! (don't forget to drink O.J.) Don't let me catch you out on that beach! Sweet dreams, silly. katy xox.

Reviewed by Susan Sparks (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
Well, I did finally take a little nap, but don't feel any better. I NEVER take naps--it must be because I'm sick. It wasn't a planned nap--I just passed out while I was trying to watch the Nascar race.

Reviewed on April 18, 2004
(((ed)))

(((((HUGS))))) hope you feel better soon! we need you here--take care of yourself

love, karla. :)

Reviewed on April 18, 2004
hope you feel better soon, ed! good write!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
Ed take red wine wram it an take two disprins with it....you will sweat like hell but will feel better after that..disprin is something like codis....not ruse what you call it in America
Best of luck buddy.....hope you feel beetr soon!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 18, 2004
I don't know what had happened, but I think you are wise in taking your friends' advices to get rest and stay in bed. Hope you'll feel better soon.

Good friendship write. Enjoyed.

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~


Reviewed by Calendula Petal (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
I was just about to offer some help and zoooom your poem disappeared.....glad to hear you feel slightly better
You say you had sinus trouble, well sinusitis makes you feel just like you described, but I am not a doctor so just a thought...
you have to go to bed..to rest!... apparently the body`s own mechanism
will first try and keep your temperature normal and only then fight off the infection, so if you behave and keep warm the infection will go quickly.....so I am told....oo and drink at least 2 litres of water a day.
Ok here endeth the lesson.......by Nurse Penny (who snaps on the latex gloves just in case)

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
Sounds like you need sleep and rest more than food. Take another nap; it's Sunday! Hope you feel better soon.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 18, 2004
Your very welcome Ed...If I lived close
I would make you my killer chicken soup..
Only it doesnt kill...it revives...
I put garlic in it...might need to use
mouthwash but your illeness would
disappear....(((smiles and hugs))) floria


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