Comical…
Yes, comical I may be,
Not serious am I, see?
Enjoy the write on the humorous side,
Writing when it is in, yes the tide,
Finding my life to be more funny,
Finding my strife to be more sunny…
Riding the wave of a comical sense,
In the past I never knew, no not hence,
It seems when I am uptight; yes tense,
My humor does for me relieve me of this tension…
I hope as for you, my humor, in the write, works for you,
As I have been told my humor in the spoken word, is less than new,
Leading me astray, making me go askew,
Taking me with the everlasting tide, out to sea in my raft just outside…
More on this subject I cannot be more open,
Things seem to flow, to percolate in my head, when I am here in bed,
I have not been too interesting, at least I don’t think,
Here in my den, since I returned from my recent inability stink…
© ed – 5/2/04
thank GOD for the comical--the world, too serious and scary
keep writing and we'll keep smiling--thanks (enjoyed)
(((HUGS))) and love, karla. :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in tx., karen lynn. :D
Debashish
PS was searching for your challenge response...
I enjoy reading your poetry. Nice write.
Best of luck,
Thomas
You do have a flair
For the comedic-
Keep up the good work
john+
We each have our own brew, and that's what makes the poet's
world go 'round.