My little Locomotive has gone round the bend (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

My little Locomotive has gone round the bend
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
Rated "G" by the Author.

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Just a hopefully humorous attempt to explain my anxiety, crazy though it may be...

My little Locomotive has gone round the bend… OKAY, so I used Ruffies name in a poem from the past, Geez you people are at times a pain in my ass, I am sorry to have misled you; I will try to give you a clue, My mind is going crazy, my brain has stated adieu… If I knew I was going to get that much response, Sooner I would have done so totally ensconced, You will note I get upset just a bit, I find it hard to stay nonchalant… I only do this to bust on those of you that did comment, If you did take no time and not leave a review, Then there is no problem herein nothing so far has gone askew, So don’t take this the wrong way, please do not misconstrue , I only mean this to be humorous and funny, we are all friends here, honey, Please don't sue... Its just that when I did read all the comments, The only thing that seemed noteworthy was how old was Rufuz, Well maybe not the only thing, but it is the part that stuck out, At least in my mind that has gone round the bend, If you have some extra mind, maybe to me you can lend… © ed ~ 12/2/04

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on December 3, 2004

Well, first, if I loaned you some of my brain, you would lose any talent you may now have for baking. (grin) Then there's the stuff about Ruffie's age: em... YOU are the one who stuck it in there, baiting the reader to see if they were paying attention... so, you can't blame us now for being astute! (Harrumph! LOL....)

As for the disgruntled parts you've written here: hey, if I had a dime for every time people missed entirely what I actually wrote, I'd be sponsoring all the fools who actually think AD is still a lovely place for writing and not a war zone! Pardon me... you provided me a soap box and I opined, as I am inclined to do. Post a poem and stand back, Eddie M... after it's up, it's public domain. Sigh... katy xox.

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap

This time, Ted has a good point. :)

Reviewed by Ted Sheridan (Reader)

Calm down Ed, and I have the name of a good doctor.

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on December 2, 2004

Wow Ed, talk about losing it...when you said.."so I used Ruffies"

I thought you said roofies...I think my locomotive has just run out of track...

Allen

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

How do you expect me to focus with half my mind????

There are too many Ed's to devide my attentiona anyways...lol!!

But I can lend you my Band Aid to keep what ever you have in place...so....much for friendship huh?

"BAND AID –

To remind you about the
memories and that broken hearts can be mend,
and…. with friends anything is possible"

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Janet Parker

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Ed, I think I can, I think I can, I know I can… lol. Choo Choo, I think I’ll sue… lol!!! Loved the thoughts, and I too wondered how old Rufuz was… lol. Only kidding, my friend. How old is he by the way?… lol. Hopefully, you’ll have your thoughts returning from behind the bend so you can mend… lol. Peace thru train traveling and having friends be a pain in the ass (sometimes)... lol.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Well if I had some to spare,
I gladly would share
But I'm tapped out on mine
So I've one to share

So much fun so little time...
felix

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Actually Ed being sane is not something that I can plead guilty too. As for my train it got derailed before it left the station.