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Rupture Zone
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Thanks Eileen for the inspiration...
Rupture Zone… That place just betwixt excruciating pain, And, “oh don’t worry, I will be fine,” Twisted back, muscles stretched to the limit, No pain worse, at least not at that time… Fortunately my back has felt of late worse, That time when all one can do is stand and curse, Sorry to be so herein terse, But damn if I don’t feel I would prefer a ride in a hearse… So when I am attacked by a rupture, I have to allow it to run its course, If I could find the exact reason, I would then it capture, I certainly do not feel in anyway enraptured… © ed ~ 1/16/06

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Reviewed by alejapoet@aol.com Bennett

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

For God makes us eel the peace and joy that the people in this world try to take away. As a writer God has blessed you with this form of release and you express very well. We must give thanks to God or our talents and allow him to help us save and touch lives. There are so many people feeling ruptured in the world because of abuse and many other trials and tribulations. We are blessed with words to encourage and put a smile on a ruptured heart, mind , body and spirit and then we say to God be the glory for the things he has done.

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

Clever write :-)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

What more can I say....ditto Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

hahahahaha you take the cake Captain Ed;-)I'm praying your rupture turns to rapture real soon...really! Rufuz be a good first mate and take care of your captain!

cheerio, eileen

Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

You're a true genius, Ed. Not everyone, even with inspiration, can write about ruptures.

Bob H

Reviewed by Rukiya Faizah (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

aaahhh...i don't know what to say. i can't really give any advice...but it was an interesting read.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

Would I be in trouble if I said to grin and bear it? Probably. I didn't say that and I did not have sex with THAT woman.

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on January 16, 2006

Ouch! Hope you feel better soon! (But still put in words so greatly)
Birgit and Roger

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