Torture chamber... (poem) by Ed Matlack on AuthorsDen

Torture chamber...
by Ed Matlack → (All Poetry by Ed Matlack)
Friday, August 28, 2015 Rated "PG13" by the Author.

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I honestly don't know what the heck this one is, it sort of rambled out, so sorry if you do find it boring...was not my intention at first, but as I got going I just went off the wall...anyway...
I use it for a number of illicit acts, A place I have for torturous pacts, I make them with devilish rats, They allow me to see inside me, bats… I could at the moment be quite high, Or I could just be to you speaking a lie, I collect many a shirt that’s tie dye, So telling you about is the reason why… The air quite cool tonight, Low to mid 60s here, What a great night to get a buzz, Not a great night to shed a tear… If this my most recent lack of literary achievement, Sounds or reads to you as being quite weird & lacking, Then I agree, its hell to have cohesive thoughts at the moment, Maybe we should get back together when I am not having a drug moment… © -me- 8/28/15 (though I don’t know why I am copywriting it, likely will take it down by tomorrow anyway) {First I have to thank the Spellchecker program in my computer, for without it you likely would not know what the hell I am talking about…as if you do…] ----------------GOODNIGHT_-_-_

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on August 30, 2015

The only thing I worry about is all the tie-dyed stuff. What a waste of good money. ;-)

You didn't take it down so I could get my crack in… Better late than never.

Ron

Reviewed by lois christensen

Reviewed on August 29, 2015

it all makes sense, especially when sleep is avoidable, like it is for me tonight. Keep writing, we read it.

Reviewed by Michael Schafer

Rats, bats and a buzz oh my!
The shit that happens when you get high.

Michael D.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

I can relate, Ed; as many others can as well. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by George Carroll

Hope for the best but you have made sense to me. Hang tough

Reviewed by Jane Noponen Perinacci

Reviewed on August 28, 2015

Let us not equate what you are feeling to THC levels. There are many reasons for what you are feeling. Good luck with it.

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by Tom poesyco.th@gmail.com

Dear Knave Knumb Knutz ...

while you r praising ur Spellchecker...
it cannot equal human editing...
ex: "shed a teat" ?
Duh... how u do dat ?

P.S. partook of a few "hits" of MJ on vacation & my
Burfday Tuesday... if it did anything after 6 beers,
I couldnt tell ...

Peace Good Buddy ...

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

I am probably feeling much the same way as you are, but in my case it is the cheap California burgundy.