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The odyssey of the planets
by J. K. Roseline → (All Poetry by J. K. Roseline)
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The study of astrology is a science based on calculations.How does this effect our little wee bit lives is beyond comprehension.
odyssey of the planets solar system,its battalion indeed the mighty power Sending waves of predictions To human race per solar moves The periodic dark of the moon cycle Its effect on lives! Or when planets are at loggerheads Send strange forces on the prowl The effect of the Sun smiling on Or at times to ward off evils befalling one Becomes cumbersome to dodge How to romance, think or perform in life To be controlled by movement of stars! It could be the beginning of the end Of times good or bad, It is indeed a whirlpool wide As madness unleashed through the affairs of the planets high ! There is no escape from its predictions In some strange uncontrollable manner Unknown forces, thoughtless actions Take charge of your life at times! Can you lay claim on the solar system! For its positioning at the timeof birth! Good,bad or what becomes of you all in the draw It also brings you luck Catapult you to unknown heights! How we leave no stone unturned To study its magic on our lives Which make puppets of us human beings When these forces rule our lives Its turbulent effect so focused On the simple existence of mankind ! O what forces in the universe Make a mince of our lives

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson

Reviewed on September 21, 2013

Astute philosophies..Fact
or Fiction, well presented, J K

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

it effects us all in many ways, the earth is a huge energy field
we can tap into all her resources. And cosmic abundance indeed we are star seeds sprinkled about...
have you seen the news about the alien life forms goming to earth from space?! It's amazing as it's chemical dna is the building blocks as our own life starters. It suggests we are from space too...

My Ancestors are Extraterrestrials
Vickie

Reviewed by Amor Sabor

Reviewed on September 16, 2013

Excellent work, Roseline.

Reviewed by Morgan Merriweather

if we could only unlock the secrets of the universe, if the moon can move water, I'll read those lucky stars and believe in all the best they have they have to offer, of course none of the bad!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton

I lean on Ron's discourse, my friend. Although I have a feeling, notwithstanding the charlatans involved with astrology, I do have a feeling we are directly affected by them. Liked your poem today.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Long ago, crafty men determined that most of us are susceptible to complicated tales derived from seemingly systematic deductions��it's probably built in as a protection in our genes.

While astrology propurts to be of the stars because its numerology uses the many cyclic opportunities there to make up conjuring, it is mostly about the human psyche and how easily it can be manipulated by those in the know, mainly to extort some coin.

Only fools are bound by astrology� and they are many.

Ron

Reviewed by Budd Nelson

i enjoyed this
budd