Hi Mike
My words are not a put down, only a suggestion. Add Adverbs & Adjectives with meter as per::
1st verse Hiding truth that no one sees
2nd verse A liar then is born
3rd. without no alibis
Most of my work was to try songs. So they had to flow to fly
I like your work and rhythum. Keep it up
Another solemn divergence from your usual lighthearted fare. Nobody likes a liar. Especially one that so blatantly lies in public in order to curry favor and gain respect when none is expected.
Unfortunately, we have a pathological liar at the home of our great nation. You see him Michael and so do I. We both wonder when his pack of lies gets so tall that it topples from its own weight.
How very true. One lie is bad enough; but they can grow and grow until some people become compulsive liars. The simple rhythm of this poem works well for its driving truth. Well done. John
Gemma succeeds in starting a girls' football team at her new school, but bitter rival Tyrone does everything he can to stop the girls playing. So begins a battle of wits between the girls and boys, and also between Gemma and sports teacher, Mrs Lawfo
My words are not a put down, only a suggestion. Add Adverbs & Adjectives with meter as per::
1st verse Hiding truth that no one sees
2nd verse A liar then is born
3rd. without no alibis
Most of my work was to try songs. So they had to flow to fly
I like your work and rhythum. Keep it up
Love ya!
Jane
Unfortunately, we have a pathological liar at the home of our great nation. You see him Michael and so do I. We both wonder when his pack of lies gets so tall that it topples from its own weight.
Ron