This piece will stand among my favorites of yours...the analogy is brilliant and subtle unspoken thoughts give it even more life.. well done, my friend...well done!
M
I enjoyed your analogy to a curtain call...among many curtain calls...but not yet the Final Curtain Call and having spent a great deal of time in the theatre myself, I know how no one performance of any play is the same as the first or the next performance. Such is life ...each day ... each year ...each relationship is lived with is own nuances.
The theater has been a big part of my life, and I loved your analogies with a theatrical production, the actual theater, and the final curtain call with our life, our bodies, and our deaths. Very well done.
Such a well written poem my friend, a bit mystical...made me think of someone's passing...a very thought provoking write indeed! I enjoyed this very much, I like to read works that compells me to go back and read more than once, making me delve deep within the write while sparking my own imagination...the last two lines of the first stanza, makes one think of their own death and the closing of their own casket...deep write my friend, one I think I will revisit again maybe in a few days and see what my thoughts are...enjoyed!
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
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M
I enjoyed your analogy to a curtain call...among many curtain calls...but not yet the Final Curtain Call and having spent a great deal of time in the theatre myself, I know how no one performance of any play is the same as the first or the next performance. Such is life ...each day ... each year ...each relationship is lived with is own nuances.
I enjoyed reading...
..jeanne..
Blessings,
Sharon
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Well written.
Georg