Eye Candy , The Other Side (poem) by Peter Paton on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

AH YES...the BLACK WIDOW...she mates, then she kills! Reminds me of the show BLACK WIDOW! Better hide your toothpaste before she puts poison in it or if you're allergic to bee venom or penicillin and she knows it, you're a goner! GYPSIES, TRAMPS, AND THIEVES! Crotchwatchers? The size of bulge, the size of a man's wallet, or not? Would be a good indicator to either go for it, or not! Good even the score write, Peter. I like this style.

Sage

Reviewed by SilverCeltic Moon

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

LOL...I hear the song "Maneater" in the background of this one. Great write...and true enought, while there is that SOB (son of a biscuit eater), there is indeed also the Vamp(mostly there is people who aren't either and little of both). ;)Silver

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

We have to agree with Eileen, it takes a BRAVE man! Enjoyed both 'drastic' pictures you've painted with your eye-candy,
Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Well I can't complain you gave us equal billing;-)
As I said before Peter, you are a brave man;-)
Well done on both counts. Pity the man of your write
that meets the woman of your write. Should make an
explosive third poem for this series;-)lol

eT

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

I'd really like to think I don't fit in this category, but then I thought when one went shopping their wallets were suppose to be lighter! What's the sense in going if you aren't going to buy anything? lol
Actually I don't shop..unless I have too. I'm not a typical female. I don't even like to shop for the holidays.
Don't be too hard on us Peter...you might actually find one of us, quite appealing some day!

Lisa

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Pretty good Peter. On the mark from a man's view. Yep! Women are human too and just as callous, cunning and calculated as men. Makes for an interesting game.

For me....I'm too much into honesty these days and that's the quality in a person that's hard to find.

Sure loved your with with this one.

Susan

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Peter,

There are women like that. I don't think I'm one of them. At least, I hope. :) Have we become that terrible? Eye-opening, no holds barred, very, very well penned, BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Thank God I never meet that kind but I know they exist. Good one Peter.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Do you know my first wife?!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

From the wise man that knows it all........lol......hehehehe!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 1, 2006

Peter,

Most excellent write; very well done! BRAVO!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D