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The Storm and the Prayer
by Felix LeRoy Perry → (All Poetry by Felix LeRoy Perry)
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This is a work of semi fiction for I have been on ships in the North on nights like this when we thought all was lost but survived...


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The Storm and the Prayer


 


Arr, twas indeed a night as the waves lashed the deck and the winds whipped the rigging like the strings of a demon’s fiddle


I stood on the bridge, foul weather gear streaming and me dead pipe clenched between me teeth trying to figure out nature’s riddle


Running before the gale five miles or more off the coast of Labrador on the cold iceberg corridor


Too far from the last safe port and the warmth of Corner Brook, God I wish we was back there once more


Lighting flashes and thunder like artillery blasts fill the wheelhouse with the anguished wrath of King Neptune’s displeasure


The skipper yells you know we seems to be taking too much water, better man the pumps if you don’t want to join Davy Jone’s treasure


A heavy list to port, and a hatchway flies off, put on your life jackets byes it may be time to start saying a prayer


Ready the life-boats, grab compass and charts, if we make it till sunrise, then the Coast Guard may make it here


 


Then a silence drew nigh, the waves rolled to mere ripples, the light on the shore, welcomed scared, frightened old seamen


We rounded the Cape and found the calm in the storm, drop anchor in safe haven, our prayer defeated the demon


 


 


 


 


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 Reviews of "The Storm and the Prayer"
Reviewed by Kathryn Collins (Reader)
Reviewed on August 5, 2007
Fiddle dee Fee,

"the winds whipped the rigging like the strings of a demon’s fiddle"

What a great line.

Drama and nail biting supense, I was rooting for those seamen all the way.

love,
Kathy

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
AAARRRRRR!!

Walt

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Great offering felix!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Fee,

Arrrr, a jolly good tale ye spin, matey: well done! Prayer changes things. :) I know.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
thought I sensed a pirate's accent in the opening verses, visions of Johnny Depp dancing in my head..LOL...seriously...enjoyed this much...you're a brave man to have experienced storms at sea....shiver's me timbers just thinkin about it

Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Compelling story, awesome imagery, enjoyed this Felix

Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Dear cuz I feel as if I am taking part in this treacherous storm myself, and one things for sure I don't like it at all. Great write cuz.

Love to you
Selena

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Felix you took us along through the storm with you. You have a great way of telling stories, you are a natural at it. Thanks for sharing.

Love ya face Cuz XOXO Rose

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 2, 2007
Great description of a storm. Personally I'm a landlubber (hope that's correct). I hate ships even in calm weather. Been on some and was always seasick. Victor

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
such a gift for story tellin'-you weave the story well with your words

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
I love the high seas, and the pirate kinda life, but this surely was quite an adventure. It makes you really think just how lucky you are when you make it back and find some kind of steady place to anchor.
I really enjoyed this.
Peace, Love, and Light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
WEll done, I could not imagine being on a boat and going through that. nope, you pen the story from experience for sure. Lady J

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
I found my breathing to be quiet and my teeth clinched as I was drawn into this drama tween man and the sea. Spellbound is another choice of words dear Fee. Ah! But you do the adventure justice. I'd like to read a saga to the mariner from you one day!
love,
Susan

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Ah This is a very REAL foe that I have faced!
When your yacht is heeling over so low that it's practically laying horizonal on the water, and you can see underwater inside the cabin....
Well You pray, and hang on LOL
Thinking back to those days of sailing around the Gulf, Uncles 35" Yacht was only a dingy in comparison to alot of the trawlers I since had the occassion to do work experience on, or Diving and fishing expeditions...never came across the squalls like we did as youngsters though...
God was there protecting us, no doubt...
Hmmmmm fascinating write here Felix.
Ch'erie

Reviewed by Lydia Shutter (Reader)
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Intensity unlimited. The use of the language an old salt might use made this all the more real. I enjoyed this very much, Fee. Lydi**

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
Don't know of many experiences as scary as being caught in a storm aboard a ship that seems to be gasping its last breath as waves from an angry sea pound against its shivering timbers.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
OOOOOO Ya Shivered me timbers with that goodun! Aye! Ya be a manly man! PURR! PURR! SC

Reviewed by H Cruz
Reviewed on August 1, 2007
An awesome adventure Felix!

Reviewed on August 1, 2007
WOW! What visual power you display in this masterpiece. I felt as if I were there experiencing it with you with every line of this strong voiced poem. BRAVO my friend.


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