Golden savannah Serengeti Last gasp of undisturbed grassland Shortgrass carpet where I play with her gazelle Her and I have been evolving together for millions of years
Forget the internal channels of physical union for a bit... for me I have a very distinct sense of bonded communion through that flat bit of belly beneath the navel... hmmmm... surface area of the womb, perhaps?! I have no idea, but that's what came to mind in your opening savannah Serengeti line. Love the heat and dust of this, Sage... as such, conjures quite a haze of mirage-like qualities: timeless, as you say. Blessed Be Blessed. LOL Kate xx
You have your long columns of poetry and your short gnomic ones, sage. Brevity is quite effective here. It's all on the image
and you got the eyes to see..... k
I was there, on the Serengeti, a silent observer...your imagery is that strong to unfold the scene on the mind. Your verse, short; succinct; but O, so powerful. Thank you, Poet and friend, for taking me to new worlds in your words.
Evolution is what it is all about Sage, the real evolution of souls aspiring to reconnect with their Maker !
Excellent usage of words again to convey a simple and direct message
Peter
A page-turning novel about a relationship between best friends that is interrupted because of betrayal , deceit, sexual promiscuity and pregnancy happens!
Rovella is a beautiful woman with a cold heart whom blames herself for an unfortunate old family secret that is literally ruining her life. This secret impedes a gorgeous woman from having happiness in her childhood, and throughout her life. Dark sec
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As always, your passion is veiled beautifully through your creative
use of metaphor!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
and you got the eyes to see..... k
I was there, on the Serengeti, a silent observer...your imagery is that strong to unfold the scene on the mind. Your verse, short; succinct; but O, so powerful. Thank you, Poet and friend, for taking me to new worlds in your words.
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Excellent usage of words again to convey a simple and direct message
Peter
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