Don't you hate the neighbor's alarm clock on your day free...?
Don't you love that frozen feet trying to warm up against your warmth thighs?t
Morning came and asks if I was yet awake
from the outside of the window of my room
with that impertinent voice of one being up
to catch that early of all proverbial worms,
but mornings have no feathers, no can’t fly,
and soon they are chased by the afternoon,
which is a good time, like any other there,
to abandon that cozy and inviting warmth.
Mine worst enemy is that nerd of a man
that went about inventing the alarm clock,
an hysterical instrument torturing mornings
when the bed are whispering don’t go…
close your eyes and forget the tick-tacks
Morpheus wants your company a little more,
mystics odalisques pouring wine and honey,
close your eyes after smashing Tick-Tock.
I am a child of the night, music and letters
to another dimension will transport my soul,
smiling cheerful mornings are asking hard
from yours truly my best punch on that nose;
in my blissful dreams poking its schnauzer
the morning comes where it don’t belong,
when I am sleeping I don’t want no grief
and on any part of me a feet that’s cold ! ! !
Thanks for the laugh on this blustery day... can't seem to get my feet warm today. I, too, am not a happy person in the morning when I have been awakened too soon!
Cryssa
Ahhh, a fellow grump such as myself! I am NOT a morning person, though I love that time a day so long as I am still awake when the sun comes up. An excellent write. Kudos to you! Rebecca
Get rid of the dang alarm clock! Let nature take its course.
By nature, I'm a morning person. I can get more done before noon than most folks get done in an entire day. BUT, there are days when sleep is necessary, and nobody or nything had better bother me -- or suffer the consequences [death]. lol
I know Dragula and his bats fly at night to avoid the sunlight, be careful you might get a vitamin D. defiency sleeping in that late, but agree there is something to be said about being awake when the sun goes down, and then burning the midnight oil, must be good for poetry, for it shows in yours ha,loved every morsel of it. Bless you Georg! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2008
Excellent poem Georg... you put a smile on my face today, love holly
lol. Now what's wrong with people with cold feet warming them up on your thigh? I thought that's what bedmates were for have I been mistaken for all these year. As for the alarm clock--they are enough to give you nightmares. Great write. Liz
Georg, if I hadn't already found my soul mate I might think I had found it in you through this poem. Oh what a wonderful write, one that I can really identify with.
Oh my, I feel the same way. I used to love the mornings but now this poem is so fitting on how I feel. Great poem and so true. Get some sleep my friend and buddle up. Love, Bonnie
A naïve councilman and a down-on-her-luck single mom try to save their county’s last stand of forest from greedy developers and a dysfunctional government.
Cryssa
Have to wait for your slice-a-cake!!
Love Tinky
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in America, Karen Lynn in Texas. :D
Newfie Hugs, Rose
enjoyed this one Georg...
John
By nature, I'm a morning person. I can get more done before noon than most folks get done in an entire day. BUT, there are days when sleep is necessary, and nobody or nything had better bother me -- or suffer the consequences [death]. lol
God bless you. Kathy
God bless you.
well thats better than the parol buzzer ringin load & clear!
Fun Read George!!
Embrasse'
Vickie
I like this wit-wise composition... "No Cold Feet...please?" has made its points and a magnificent poem is delivered.
In admiration,
Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU
Christine
Fee
Hey, we should make that, the Ancient Ed Song!
And the coldest feet in the world, gotta belong to Mean Tall Woman,
Thank God we got lots of warm furry critters around to warm mine up.
be well and happy,
Kathy