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Indifference
she knew, had always known,
her path would wind itself through
out-of-the-way meadows, her journeys
would follow uncharted courses,
drawing unpredictable maps and
destinations... and she knew too
that these choices were her own
to make, not for the naysayers, who
listed the reasonings of 'could not'
and 'should not', to decide, defining
capabilities with misconceptions of
flawed and misguided thinking... she
raised her shield of determination, flailed
a dagger of stubbornness, turned
'blind' eyes to conformity of others,
hiding the bruising of spirit, the
questioning of self, left by their lack
of faith in her... and she hid it well
behind the mask of indifference.
© mdbadgerow 2009
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To thine own self be true. I love this marvelous poem in so many ways, beginning with your obvious writing talent, the way you maintain the pace through excellent run-ons from one stanza to the next, wrapping it up in the perfect conclusion: she hid it well
behind the mask of indifference. My admiration. -gene.
Edwin
hugs
fee
You probe and evaluate well here and come out with a gem; love the phrasing and word choice and the hooks that link the stanzas so effortlessly, fluently.
John
Be always safe,
Karen
Hugs and Love,
Marcia