You nut! I see images of Matchstick Men, Strawberry Alarm Clocks and Crimson and Clover while I'm Dancing In The Moonlight in Itchicoo Park. Flashback? Thanks for the chuckles, Ron...
firstly, the rhyming couplets work very well for you ... the alliteration is smooth and works well within the body of the poem and the motif is whimsically quite syntactically stimulating ...
"Forest copulating capillaries chlorophyll, green grows the oxygen air of the still" -- now there is a scientific wonder dripping with humor and plantly lust -- this is way cool Ron -- peace and love my friend -- Jon Michael
Book Two of The Jade Owl Legacy Series: The quest continues as the Professor and his confidants discover the full weight of their mission and acquire supernatural powers to further heir success.
Ragged and weary from their previous ordeals, Braxton and his motley crew of elves, dwarves, and humans, set off into the Wilderkind Forest in search of the Sapphire of Souls. The problem is, the last time anyone saw the powerful gem was over a hundr
Deemed One of the Top 10 indie Fantasy releases of 2010 by Fantasy Book Critic, and listed in the first ever Publishers Weekly Indie Select issue, the original 235k word epic title was written in longhand in a Texas prison cell by M. R. Mathias.
Lin
EDWIN
Love,
Eileen
Be always safe,
Karen
Take care,
Sherry