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Maiden and the Knight
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An olde English dream...


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 Maiden and the Knight


In the darke of the night,
in the pale moone light,
demure in the sight,
of her golden hair.

For no one could save her,
save those who could savor,
and thus win her favor,
and a wink of her eye.

In her castle keep,
where she could not sleep,
she wished she could leap,
to her death below.

For she had been troth,
to an ogre from the north,
a poison from a witch's broth,
would quickly end her sorrow.

But In the morning light,
its reflection shining bright,
the polished armor of a knight,
came into view.

The castle was abuzz with cheer,
a Crusades hero drew near,
his accomplishments no peer,
in all the land of yore.

As a man of the hour,
the lord doth shower,
the knight with honor,
as a welcome guest.

With an eagle's power,
the knight spied in the tower,
the golden haired flower,
high in the keep.

The ogre soon arrived,
and as the lord had connived,
the maiden's life be deprived,
the very next day.

A great feast began,
and all the lord's men,
joined in until long after when,
the last barrel of meade rolled.

The knight slipped out, ignored,
while the whole host snored,
jammed an arrow in a gourd,
and tied a rope on tight.

Outside the castle wall,
where the maiden's tears fall,
with gentle night bird call,
the knight wooed her out.

The arrow was shot,
and the maiden, hit not,
climbed down from that spot,
to her knight's arms.

They rode into the darke,
in great haste for their lark,
knowing that a high marke,
would be placed o're their heads.

'Till dawn they rode,
'till sleep like a load,
upon them abode,
by a gentle stream.

They awoke in a dream,
full of flowers, honey, and cream,
to the last sun 's beam,
they frolicked and played.

Hearing hounds on the hill,
they rode for the thrill,
for no one could kill,
their new love.

Not prone to boast,
they accepted captain's toast,
as they sailed for the coast,
of France and their freedom.

Copyright 2013 © Ronald W. Hull

6/28/13

 


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 Reviews of "Maiden and the Knight"
Reviewed by Regis Schilken
Reviewed on July 28, 2013
This poem reminds me of "The Lady of Shalott" written by Alfred Tennyson in 1832.

Very nice.

Reviewed by J. Roseline
Reviewed on July 6, 2013
Such love stories make great for any time period and when it so beautifully crafted with rhythm and style , like the gallop of a horse feel like going on and on....don't want it to end!!

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on July 4, 2013
It is difficult to translate a narrative into poetic form, and do it well. You haver succeeded...

Chip Bergeron

Reviewed by Shirley Long
Reviewed on July 2, 2013
Ron this is such a well-written poem. Each verse had me captivated
and I enjoyed reading this tale of the Maiden and The Knight. I
am glad he finally came in the end to save her. He was her knight
in shining armour. (smile). You told the story well. Loved It.
You are truly a good poet.

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on July 2, 2013
Great tale, Ronald!!! Love the way you phrased it!!

Anna

Reviewed by M Flack
Reviewed on July 1, 2013
A very well crafted poem in the form of an Olde Ballad.

Reviewed by Mary Ann Biddinger
Reviewed on July 1, 2013
~Ron~
Of Knighthood and maiden's fair. A beautiful tale you have
versed. Enjoyed~~

Lady Mary Ann

Reviewed by William Bonilla
Reviewed on July 1, 2013
an fantastic piece Ron
truly enjoyed
Peace be with you

William

Reviewed by Dark Knight
Reviewed on July 1, 2013
wow--Excellent--loved the story you weaved with great images to feast upon

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 30, 2013
Full of personality and your characteristic originality, Ron!
Be well,
Christine

Reviewed by Beverly Scofield
Reviewed on June 30, 2013
I loved you comment: Go figure. Ron, characters just seem to have a mind of their own, and the best writing lets them have their heads sometimes. I liked your story very much.

Reviewed on June 30, 2013
crafted very well, Ron.

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on June 30, 2013
Ron, it morphed nicely. New love holds a fascination for everyone. The coast of France is a perfect venue to experience and appreciate the same. May love and peace be always with you my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Myrna Badgerow
Reviewed on June 30, 2013
Italics have gotten really difficult for me to read but I thik I got the gist of this.. a wonderful tale indeed.. Myrna

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 30, 2013
A tale well told!

Reviewed on June 29, 2013
A wonderful story poem, enjoyed this Ron.

Reviewed by Alan Cook
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Sir Walter Scott is smiling down on you and reciting "Lochinvar."

Reviewed by Mor Inchrory
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Why, Why did it have to be France?

Reviewed by Vivian Dawson
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Happy endings never grow old
no matter the time or place!

Lady Vivian

Reviewed by Ruan Mills
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Lovely piece. Mine have a habit of morphing into something else. I call it sculpting with words.

Should the first Knight be a night?
Rx

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
a wonderful tale told exquisitely
budd

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Very nice indeed, Ron.

Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Exquisite!

Love ya!

Jane

Reviewed by E Phillips
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Everything was hunky dory until the last line.
But romance in France?
No chance. :)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Ahhh . . . True love . . . Lustful days and nights(Knights?) . . . And they all lived happily ever after . . . er . . . Until there is another maiden to be saved.

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on June 29, 2013
Like many of my poems, this one was a dream of a maiden in a cottage. I intended a simple, country poem of nostalgic purpose. Instead, it morphed into the traditional damsel in distress...go figure?



Ron


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