In the Garden of Eden
Eve is blamed for the original sin
But Adam, like a snake, is what did men in
For if he wasn’t so much like the snake
Eve won’t have been tempted to take
The bite offered by that other snake
Still Adam had a choice to make
He could have grabbed his own fruit
But Adam like all men who followed suit
Couldn’t even reach up
Or let Eve disrupt
His watching of the tug of war
Between the ants that Eve thought was a bore
So with a grunt Adam took his bite
And now he has to work all his life.
Regis
The image of God fashioning Eve out of Adam's rib may have originated in an ancient legend from Mesopotamia. The Mesopotamian story probably influenced the Hebrew one, which became the basis for one biblical version of Eve's creation.
This finding was shown in the history channel a couple of days ago.
It seems to me that there is something wrong with
the equation today.
Very entertaining!
Axilea
I've never seen such an unusual take on this story. Unfortunately, Eve's decision was ultimately the most offensive - hence the punishment of childbirth, PMS.... What I like about this poem is how you thought outside the box and showcased your sense of humor - which, as you know, I love very much! Love and Hugs,
Sheila
and did you know why men chase us women who were created from one of Adams Ribs? Well I was told us ladies got his good/best rib & he wanted it back ;)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Fee
There sure are many ways to look at this topic,and yours
is as good as any;-)...ET
its humors as you well know
Adam and Eve are equally responsible
Excellent visuals and flow
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning star
Be always safe,
Karen
((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.
Love,
Sage