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In The Garden of Eden
by Elizabeth A. Price → (All Poetry by Elizabeth A. Price)
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I believe in God. Jesus Christ is my personal savior. I believe in the Holy Spirit. However, there is an historical text that has never given the woman's side of the story. Here is what I feel is Eve's side of the story...

 

In the Garden of Eden
 
 
Eve is blamed for the original sin
But Adam, like a snake, is what did men in
For if he wasn’t so much like the snake
Eve won’t have been tempted to take
The bite offered by that other snake
Still Adam had a choice to make
He could have grabbed his own fruit
But Adam like all men who followed suit
Couldn’t even reach up
Or let Eve disrupt
His watching of the tug of war
Between the ants that Eve thought was a bore
So with a grunt Adam took his bite
And now he has to work all his life.
 
 

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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on September 11, 2008
Thank you for sharing your point of view, Liz. I appreciate it. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Joey Lawsin
Reviewed on August 14, 2008
The mythologies of many cultures include stories of a first couple, a man and woman who were the parents of the entire human race. In the Jewish, Christian, and Islamic religious traditions, these first parents were Adam and Eve.

The image of God fashioning Eve out of Adam's rib may have originated in an ancient legend from Mesopotamia. The Mesopotamian story probably influenced the Hebrew one, which became the basis for one biblical version of Eve's creation.

This finding was shown in the history channel a couple of days ago.

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Good thinking outside the box as said below Liz. Only the folks below haven't heard that God told him he could have the perfect mate for an arm and a lake. Then Adam replied, "That's kind of pricey, what can I get for a rib?" Us snakes have been paying ever since...Jerry

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on July 16, 2008
very nice. Enjoyed the read.

Reviewed by Axilea MU
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Why doe Eve have to work too, then?
It seems to me that there is something wrong with
the equation today.

Very entertaining!

Axilea

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Thanks Liz. I needed a good piece of fiction to read today and you came through with a beauty. ;) Seriously, very well done my friend.

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 15, 2008
Liz,
I've never seen such an unusual take on this story. Unfortunately, Eve's decision was ultimately the most offensive - hence the punishment of childbirth, PMS.... What I like about this poem is how you thought outside the box and showcased your sense of humor - which, as you know, I love very much! Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
yes it could have been like that...makes perfect sense
and did you know why men chase us women who were created from one of Adams Ribs? Well I was told us ladies got his good/best rib & he wanted it back ;)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
This sounds very reasonable to me Elizabeth. I always thought God made man the way they are today and women the way men see them, therefore Adam would go along with whatever to get his own way and like SOME men today, they are't pleased with the outcome. Thank you forsharing a smile on my face.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Oh yea sure even when we don't know what we did wrong we still take the blame. lol

Fee

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Liz, you have given me my first good laugh in a week!;-)
There sure are many ways to look at this topic,and yours
is as good as any;-)...ET

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Ha ha I love it
its humors as you well know
Adam and Eve are equally responsible
Excellent visuals and flow
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and Light...Morning star

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Nice twist to an old tale, like the concept...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on July 14, 2008
Haha, never thought of it like this before, Elizabeth, well done! Both at fault: Eve, for giving into temptation, Adam, for not turning away thus leading both (all of us) down the road to ruin. Well done!

((((HUGS)))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
An old old story it is but sin came into the world through Adam and Eve doing this and we must work all our days for the things we have now. Toil is necessary because of their sin, and days are not easily gotten through even, but through the grace of God and prayers we shall win out in the end. Another garden is promised at the end of our day, cicling around and around til the day comes again for a beautiful land to be ours to share in. just forever and ever too.

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
lol, humorous and very thought provoking!!!! Absoluetly love it!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on July 14, 2008
New spin on polishing the apple, Liz...it's amazing how myth has been popularized over the centuries, but one thing still holds true and tangible, something we know is real and can see, the worm still crawls from the apple...good to see you posting.

Love,
Sage


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