Discovering the joys of gum chewing for the umpteenth time...
Tongue pushes the goo
Around in my mouth
Stretch it out
Poke it through
My lips and then
A pursed pout
Produces noises
Snaps and clicks
The sounds of
Popping gum
It's like a stress
Blob of elasticy stuff
Enabling the activity
To erase all my
Huff and Puff
And that's enough...
The roof of my mouth is
Ruff ruff ruff
This is deliciously delightful and kind of nasty. I love it.
Reviewed by ya mama (Reader)
Reviewed on May 25, 2004
a wonderful poem.
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 23, 2004
WOWOWOW yes you captured it I also like to smooth it over the tip of my tongue ;)
SMILES
Reviewed by Nicole Davis Vergara (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
LOL...since getting pregnant eight months ago and quitting ciggys till baby comes I too have refound the pleasures of chewing gum! :O)
Very nice work Lynn!
Funny. I haven't chewed gum in years. Perhaps I'll have to try it again.
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 22, 2004
Hee,hee, blow some big bubbles
get in hair, and everywhere...
You write these truly well
In school, I would have to sit in
class with my big wad of gum stuck to the
end of my nose for chewing it in class.
Not Funny! hee, hee..Love ya cuzz..
I must get started on band sketch..busy, busy....
Deputy Dave Jenkins sets out to find the murderer of the local high school principal, aided by a voice from the grave that is sometimes helpful and sometimes misleading.
"Murder isn't usually this funny."
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Farctured Frazzled Folk Fables and Fairy Farces, Part II satirizes popular children's stories into adult-oriented renditions. FFFF &FF, Part II is also available in Amazon Kindle and Barnes and Noble e-book formats.
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Very nice work Lynn!
~Nikki~
get in hair, and everywhere...
You write these truly well
In school, I would have to sit in
class with my big wad of gum stuck to the
end of my nose for chewing it in class.
Not Funny! hee, hee..Love ya cuzz..
I must get started on band sketch..busy, busy....