"She doesn't drink
Or want to smoke"
"Is she too good?"
"Is she a joke?"
I hear these comments
From time to time
How would you like it?
Is it a crime?
To not be a drinker
Or smoker, boo hoo
To not drink or smoke
Because you don't want to.
Criticized for not indulging
Makes me crazy, my eyes bulging
Mad enough to reach, I mean
For a cold one and nicotine...
--Party hearty it's Saturday night!
Pass the peanuts and Pepsi, please--
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Reviews of "Too good to be fun?????"
Reviewed by L M (Reader)
Reviewed on November 16, 2003
Wonderful poem.
Reviewed by Richard Vallance (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
Fun!
Richard Vallance
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on November 15, 2003
That is what they want you to do. To see if you make a fool of yourself like they do. I know you are a strong person.
Don't pay any attention to wise cracks on here either.
Great writing......
Lurve ya cuzz your loveable...........
Keep up with the Pepsi and peanuts, Lynn. They simply envy your strength to refuse those things not good for us. Bravo! Well written. Love in Christ~~ Bonnie Q
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Fun!
Richard Vallance
Don't pay any attention to wise cracks on here either.
Great writing......
Lurve ya cuzz your loveable...........
Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu :o)