Sweet Purity
I love the world after a heavy rain
All bathed so clean and new
Like wonderful natural deodorant
Sprayed in the air
The scent all fresh like dew.
I love the beautiful old trees
All silently green as they sleep
Like gentle peaceful centuries
Watching over the earth
Protecting beauty they want to keep.
I love the green growing grass
Rising out of the fertilized ground
Like freshly shampooed carpet
Beneath my feet
Renewed like magic all around.
I love the cheerful colors of the sky
The pale white and blue turning yellow
Like a giant artist’s brush
Brushing paint against a canvas
To the tune of angels singing with a cello.
But most of all I love the purity after a rain
With all nature so crisp and clean
As if God has started everything
All new and fresh again
To create a landscape worthy of being seen.
© 2008 Jeanette Cooper
It all makes me wonder that when our individual Judgment Day comes upon us if we'll even bother to acknowledge God's presence before we're off to whatever we've earned for our Hereafter.
Are we becoming a little too focused on our own egocentric universe?
"Sweet Purity" is a very polite Wake-up Call reminding us that if we don't stop to smell the roses and acknowledge who makes them grow we may not be needed around here anymore.
I loved this poem and message, Jeanette: "All fresh like dew"!
Richard
You are a gifted poet! You capture moods like this with unique similes and detailed imagery. Very well done!
Sheila
Be always safe,
Karen
Peace, love and light,
Amber "V"
Christine
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Jeanette "Sweet Purity" is beautiful and refreshing to say the least.
The imagery intertwined throughout this work is lush and replenishing. Thank you for sharing this awesome beauty through and from your eyes to your pen.
Sincerely,
~Gwendolyn
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Like the rain, your poem is cleansing and refreshing, a lovely picture to start my new day.
Connie