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Withers the light.....
by Karen Palumbo → (All Poetry by Karen Palumbo)
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           Withers the light.....


Strolling quietly at the waters edge,
one star, two stars, three stars shine bright.
Orange, yellow glow fills the horizon,
until darkness slowly withers the light.

Birds in the distance weaving in and out,
of the pastel lines etched in the boroughs.
Flirting between two different worlds,
dreaming of the yesterdays and all tomorrows.

Strange eerie sounds begin to surround,
as coastline converts to a different place.
Tiny fiddler crabs gently scoot across,
identifying what was, as if to retrace.

Moonlight scattered across the waves,
riding into shore on angel wings.
As if Pegasus was leading the charge,
wanting to show them shiny new things.

Dolphins, pelicans, seagulls gone home,
ocean creeps up, then washes away.
Leaving a void in the center of it all,
cleansing, erasing everything in its way.

Lonely moan is heard in the distance,
from one lighthouse forever smitten.
Stories it could tell, if it could speak,
of long ago young couples love bitten.

She in long gown, parasol in hand,
warm tears streaming down her face.
He in uniform, shiny buttons and cap,
reassuring words in style and grace.

He must leave while she remains behind,
in a pocket watch her photo close at heart.
She will keep vigil on this sandy shore,
both staring at the stars never to part.

Once dry sand is cold and wet,
as memories linger in darkness of night.
Wondering what the morning will bring,
when darkness leaves and sky turns bright.

 

 

Written by:
Karen Palumbo
Photography by:
Robert Palumbo
6/18/2010 © All rights reserved 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Withers the light....."
Reviewed by The Poetess
Reviewed on August 20, 2010
SO wonderfully heart touching that it brought me there
To feel sand on my feet and a salty breeze comb my hair.
;-)

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 5, 2010
A beautiful Photo . I love the shades of the sea and sky line...The poem has wonderful visual images. It's filled with nostaliga and a winsomeness.........M

Reviewed by Darkest Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on June 30, 2010
I am both happy to read this and to know you had the moments to create this from. This one is very vivid and soft in the mind, as read. I was feeling myself there the whole time--thanks for a divine ride, Karen.

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on June 29, 2010
A most engaging creative offering, Karen. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and best wishes to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on June 27, 2010
Haunting, Karen. Beautifully written. Love and Hugs,
Sheila

Reviewed by Kathleen McDonald
Reviewed on June 26, 2010
Such a lovely work.

Reviewed by Margaret Mullings
Reviewed on June 25, 2010
Beautiful! Beautiful "Withers the light" so comforting and serene,
"When darkness leaves and sky turns bright." What excellent poetry
Karen, and hats off to Robert for this outstanding picture! Thank
you both. May the Lord bless you with His presence and His peace!
Please give those adorable two hugs for me!!!!

Much Love,
Margaret

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on June 21, 2010
Peaceful. . . .
and Beautiful
Anticipation of sunrise
Warms the soul

Reviewed by Jms Bell
Reviewed on June 21, 2010
YOUR PHRASES, RHYME AND RHYTHM PRODUCE SUCH A VIVID IMAGERY OF ONE STUNNING SCENE, AS...WITHERS THE LIGHT. A MOST IMPRESSIVE OFFERING... THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR SHARING. BLESSINGS AND LOVE,
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS

Reviewed by Connie Faust
Reviewed on June 20, 2010
This is so smooth-flowing and lovely. I'm far from the ocean, and your picturesque descriptions of falling night made me feel the beauty of its transformation.
Connie

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 20, 2010
Waves should coming with whispers from afar, it would be but the picture perfect for a perfect poem...

Georg


Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on June 20, 2010
Another wonderful piece of poetry. Hugs, J'nia

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on June 20, 2010
a poem beautiful and alluring ... a natural spark of being ...

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
And we pray that he comes home. Patrick

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
Calmly and warmly expressed, Karen; your sensitivity shines here and your understanding of 'the bigger picture' comes through very well. Fine work.

John

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
A beautiful write Karen and I love the picture.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
This is stellar Karen poetry!!! I especially thought the ending stanza finishes this poem off perfectly!!! Lovely work my dear friend.
Peace, love and light,
Amber

Reviewed by Richard King
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
Masterfully said. You've either been there or have a fantastic imagination. Either way, you took me there. Thanks Dick

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
Wonderfully written piece, Karen.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Karen Nivens
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
That's beautiful. I feel like I'm relaxing on a quiet beach at the base of a lighthouse wondering about all the lives that have past by and depended on its grace. You should send this to one of the many foundations trying to preserve lighthouses.

Reviewed on June 19, 2010
All heart and soul bared in love, and the throbbing feelings of your elegant words. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
A sweepingly romantic poem. You bring a pointillist sensibility to the picture you've drawn. I can hear Edward Mulhare reading this.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
Karen, this is absolutely beautiful.

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
This is absolutely beautiful Karen ~ You have written this with great care and it is flawless!!!!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
This is so moving and hit close to home, my daughters hubby is a fisherman but up until recently was usually only out on day trips but the poor catches etc forced him to go out on crab boats off Sable Island and he'll be gone days, sometimes weeks at a time. My daughter and grand daughter (5yrs old) miss him terribly as they are a really close and loving family. My daughter decided to take her and come to my place to make me breakfast to take her mind off her daddy not being there. It almost broke my daughters heart when she told her no thanks you go make breakfast for your father and I will stay home to make breakfast for my Dad...not knowing he wouldn't be there....
fee

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
Pure poetry in magnificent style.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
Quite a captivating piece, Karen.

Reviewed by Deborah Tornillo
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
Karen: Very captivating and beautifully written.

Deborah

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
Memories,i.e.We Can Dream Can't We!!!

TRASK

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on June 19, 2010
Beautifully written, Karen. God bless.

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on June 18, 2010
A beautiful keepsake in the poetry scrapbook, Karen...this one really sits well on the page and the photograph by Robert really adds texture to this whole piece...the references are just fabulous and the images bring this poetry to life...it regenerates the whole concept of a 24-hour day and the memories of a lifetime are rekindled. Be well you and Robert.

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on June 18, 2010
well done,

Reviewed by David Maclellan
Reviewed on June 18, 2010
I found you poem very evocative Karen. It made me consider that the beautiful places where we enjoy our moments in this present time, could once have been occupied by lovers in the past that were living in much more uncertain times. In my humble opinion this is a beautifully crafted verse.
Best regards, David.


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