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Angry Sea Winds
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fierce wind whipped my hair across
face stinging the corner of my eye
making it tear

squinting, i decided to leave the beach
as wind pelted my skin with sand each
gust feeling like bee stings

my friendly ocean was fuming, sea storms
are exciting, but  ferocious wind, changes
everything temperature,colors,atmosphere

the waters churning,turning dirty brown
mimicked a  lovers quarrel,with the
angry sky shouting at the blustering sea
a gale stirring all into a frenzy

hardly able to catch my breath, forced 
to take cover, i hurried to the boardwalk
cafe, before the clouds burst, to watch the
storm play out

soon the heavens opened spouting laser like
lightning, and rapacious rain,while i calmly
sipped my rumcafeo, watching day turn into
night,  with a contented smile

etw-2008

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Angry Sea Winds"
Reviewed on October 28, 2008
capture of a camera Eileen, you truly painted the scene, good and mean
:-)

Reviewed by Larry Rochelle
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
One of your all-time best!

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
you have captured the moment with gusto, vivid imagery and an emotional release that is contagious ...

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
Brings back vivid images of visits to California beaches in winter, when the only respite was a glassed in restaurant with a view. I could feel this one.

Ron

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
Storms must resonate with you, Eileen, because you have caught their moods and motions so very completely with your acute and vibrant descriptions. Paradoxically, as much as I thrill to sun'n'sea, it is also these weather conditions that totally exhilarate, too... as long as there's a cuppa Earl Grey within g(r)asping distance! :)) Screaming into that whipped-up wind is a GREAT way to let off steam unheard! To be recommended! Then comes the contented smile... xx

Reviewed on October 27, 2008
Eileen,

Scripted with breathtaking precision . . . powerful!


Hugs,

Lance

Reviewed on October 27, 2008
Stunningly imaged, I felt the power of the waves and storm: well done, Eileen. A StormSpinner type of write: wish I'd written this one!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
..I felt like I was standing right along side you,,,I could feel the temperature drop.... and the calm after the storm. Well Done!
Love,Christine

Reviewed by Bonnie May
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
Everytime I come to this site I leave with such beauty and love in my heart. I almost hate to leave but the poem ends, I just can't sit here, can I? Yes, I will sit here for awhile and take in more of this beautiful write. Love, Bonnie

Reviewed on October 27, 2008
Refuge from the raging sea sound good to me, especially with rum and tea, or for you yanks caffee ha, Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed on October 27, 2008
Another beauty from your golden pen, Eileen; I'm undone by your words! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
sounds absolutely lovely!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
Quite a powerful piece, Tiger Lily - love the music, too.

PS Don't talk to strangers in that Boardwalk Cafe; Undercover Jersey Ed is on the prowl!

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
I love the ocean but would rather watch the storm from an inclosed area. Thank you for sharing a well described story within your words Eileen.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
well said

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on October 27, 2008
I LOVE the ocean in a storm, its the best time to be on the beach communing with mom ocean...Ed

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
Anyone drinking rumcoffee doesn't need the excuse of a storm, they just will whipped a storm just for have one.
Now there is the sixtifour dollars question, what did you said to it, to the seas to make it so mad? because it wasn'st just walking on the beach, you said something under your breath thinking nobody would hear and then WHAM! the seas did.
Next time order one for me too.

Georg


Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
Those sea winds are powerful.I like the ending of the poem.take care of yourself

Edwin

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on October 26, 2008
The ocean is mighty soothing but in a storm you have to let it play out.


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