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Transitioning
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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 - Why do we play with words? - She wonders,

- Do we hold the dragonfly’s wings to look through them

and check if the world is upside down? -

She sees translucent wonders by the pond;

a wing is a mirroring experience,

a flight to the core and back,

and the cruelty of torn wings is only

worsened by denial of responsibility.

It hurts.

A few inches from the sleepy water,

in the middle of bromeliads lie

suspended lives in thousands of eggs,

while the slow rhythm of shallow water nurses you,

like a clock ticking through your sleep,

in the oily essence of the afternoon.

She sits there, on the warm rocks,

feeling the aquatic creature in her,

sensing the silent and restless fight

of nymphs. Thoughts swarm about,

growing, waiting for the breeze.

She holds a leaf of grass • a pebble • a flower,

not much.

No distress.

Adult mayflies dance around for a while,

short-lived in the violet sky.

A word • a wing • a stone • a token,

a price to pay, transitioning. 


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 Reviews of "Transitioning"
Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on August 8, 2011
Analytical and deliberating with the earthy beauty of an amorphous "transition" is this rendering Axilea. Conception, birth, life death the cycle captive of all things living. Your interpretation gives the symphony of life its own uniquely inspiring aria. It please me, this work of yours. I bid you love and peace my friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on August 2, 2011
Whatever the reason, Axilea, never stop playing with words. -gene.

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on July 25, 2011
Axilea, Curiosity, questions, life, living,
"Transitioning."
Always,
Deborah

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on July 21, 2011
Axilea,
I especially like the part about the wings. I read this twice:)
Sheila

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on July 20, 2011
Excellent work with a myriad of images that compose the beauty of your muse.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on July 20, 2011
A quiet, birthing reflection. I like best the strong ending, beginning with "She sits there, on the warm rocks..." to the last, penetrating, words.

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on July 19, 2011


A deep depth is in the words and structure of this piece of poetical genesis. You take the broken-wing and give it majestic meaning as the dragonfly muses awaiting certain death, but she knows her eggs will carry her heart onward and outward never to die the bloodline.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 19, 2011
Now this could be the start of a book...intriguing and left me wanting more!
Christine

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on July 18, 2011
I really felt caught between two worlds reading this, and I loved it- it almost felt like glimpsing something one shouldn't be seeing through a misty window. Love it.

Reviewed by Patrick Granfors
Reviewed on July 15, 2011
Most metamorphoses are a natural course of life, others are a deliberate choice to alter life's course. May your wings be strong Axilea. Patrick

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
"She sits there, on the warm rocks,
feeling the aquatic creature in her,"

she is observant spirit, alive soul
knowing the truths of change and passing,
the delicate ephemeral nymph..
your feathery voice, Axilea, in this work
is most appropriate but it's not featherweight
for there is pondering and understanding.

John

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
"and the cruelty of torn wings is only
worsened by denial of responsibility."

Axilea....this is absolutely BRILLIANT!!!!

Chip Bergeron


Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
Such a meditative work of art, peaceful and profound!
Blessings,
Christine

Reviewed by Branch Isole (Reader)
Reviewed on July 14, 2011
The appreciation of lightness is expressed so adequately herein, the entire piece was if as floating aloft. I am especially taken by the vivid lines: "in the middle of bromeliads lie suspended lives in thousands of eggs"


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