- Why do we play with words? - She wonders,
- Do we hold the dragonfly’s wings to look through them
and check if the world is upside down? -
She sees translucent wonders by the pond;
a wing is a mirroring experience,
a flight to the core and back,
and the cruelty of torn wings is only
worsened by denial of responsibility.
It hurts.
A few inches from the sleepy water,
in the middle of bromeliads lie
suspended lives in thousands of eggs,
while the slow rhythm of shallow water nurses you,
like a clock ticking through your sleep,
in the oily essence of the afternoon.
She sits there, on the warm rocks,
feeling the aquatic creature in her,
sensing the silent and restless fight
of nymphs. Thoughts swarm about,
growing, waiting for the breeze.
She holds a leaf of grass • a pebble • a flower,
not much.
No distress.
Adult mayflies dance around for a while,
short-lived in the violet sky.
A word • a wing • a stone • a token,
a price to pay, transitioning.
"Transitioning."
Always,
Deborah
I especially like the part about the wings. I read this twice:)
Sheila
A deep depth is in the words and structure of this piece of poetical genesis. You take the broken-wing and give it majestic meaning as the dragonfly muses awaiting certain death, but she knows her eggs will carry her heart onward and outward never to die the bloodline.
Christine
feeling the aquatic creature in her,"
she is observant spirit, alive soul
knowing the truths of change and passing,
the delicate ephemeral nymph..
your feathery voice, Axilea, in this work
is most appropriate but it's not featherweight
for there is pondering and understanding.
John
worsened by denial of responsibility."
Axilea....this is absolutely BRILLIANT!!!!
Chip Bergeron
Blessings,
Christine