elevator (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Simon Thurlow (Reader)

Reviewed on March 12, 2004

LOL...this appealed to my 'weird' sense of humour. Nice write

Reviewed on March 9, 2004

Great, imaginative composition. Very consciously portrays the emotions we undergo in a panic situation. Nice job, Karla. Franz

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 9, 2004

You, my dear Karla, are the very soul of clever.. with a capital "C"... what a read... what an EXPERIENCE! You had me
so involved I felt panic. This isn't just writing, it's truly cool expression! ("cool" being another "C" word.. smile). What
a mind you've got... Jaysus! katy xox.

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Scary thought, I would hate that! Excellent Karla!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

HAHA OH NOw this is clever......

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Yikes....fearful moment!!

Hat elevators.....that liftoff/down....leaves an awfull feeling in my stomach and head!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Karla:

Scary thought being stuck in an elevator, ugh not something I want to experience...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by Cherry Pie (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Could feel the fear ............ great write

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Karla you portray this drama well instilling fear in the reader of being caught in a similar position. Wonderful write and interesting form!

Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

I really liked this one a lot. I however enjoy small dark places. Still a great write.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Oh I love the form Karla...great job...
this has happened to me...I was with another
lady and she panicked...I could just feel
the fear again...great write...floria

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

(((Karla)))

This is too cool; love the way you added visuals to your poem; can actually see the PERSON trapped in the elevator! This gives the poem new depth and meaning! BRAVA! Your creative nature is taking off with a bang, and it is exciting to see! Very well done; thoroughly enjoyed~

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

been there done that too
scary
loved your write

William

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on March 8, 2004

Great capture of the fear of this situation!