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the MOTHER of all days
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Happy Mother's Day to all the mothers out there!


i think i saw every mother on the planet,
they all came into my restaurant to eat.
the line went around the building (at least two times),
people were having to wait to get a seat.

when they came in, each was given a carnation,
some of the children wanted a flower, too.
we let them have them, to prevent altercation,
to say, we love you mom, and to say thank you.

they came in by the carload, they came in by truck,
i thank the Lord they didn't come in by bus!
we didn't run out of food, by sheer grace and luck,
or they would have really raised a big old fuss!

i think i saw every mother on the planet,
they all came into my restaurant to eat.
the line went around the building (at least two times),
thank God it's over--ask my poor aching feet!!

~~~HAPPY MOTHER'S DAY--it was an honor serving you!~~~

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman. 


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 Reviews of "the MOTHER of all days"
Reviewed on May 10, 2004
This was wonderful...
God Bless
Michelle R Kidwell

Reviewed by Bhuwan Thapaliya
Reviewed on May 10, 2004
Wonderful write my friend!!!!

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on May 10, 2004
I agree with ED K below, and I have one other thing to say, while soaking you feet, soak you head, it couldn't hurt, LOL! What a wonderful humorous poem you have concocted here, Karla, I like seeing you do humor every now and then as it brings out a shine in you...Peace,Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on May 10, 2004
Even though you have aching feet, Karla, you have a wondrous, loving heart. Wonderful write! Now, go soak those feet.

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 10, 2004
Thanks for sharing this beautiful piece, Karla!

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Karla, they really put you through the mill on Mothers Day. But I know you stayed the course with your Carnations and the mile high stacks of food you had to serve. Well, this is my special Mothers Day for you. Beloved heart of AD. Wish I were young; then you could be my Mother and we could celebrate the day together. Hugs and love Bill xoxo

Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
LOL- I was one of those people today with my mom...and the carnations...I also worked all day at the bookstore and put up with throngs of people, so I can relate. This was great!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Thanks for sharing this well written piece Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
good one

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
I agree with Eileen
You-da-Woman!
Your friend in a state by yours...
x0x0x0x

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Karla, you have a great attitude! Thanks for
serving all those mothers and for your good
wishes! May blessings to you abound!;-)

Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Sorry we were part of the crowd. this was great and gave me a good laugh at the end
rest those feet in a nice warm hot tub now and have a great week
Tommy

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
lol
i could just imagine........well done......the poem and your day!!!!!!!! lol
pax.......A

Reviewed by Rose L
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Karla,

This is brilliant and funny! Today is a LONG day for anyone in the service industry - one that can be trying at best. Thank YOU for making it such a memorable day with a smile and humor.

~Rose~

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
A mother's most common lament!

Reviewed by Abe Rossi (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Well sounds like maybe it's your turn...you should order out...rest them feet of yours...enjoyable read...nice write...thanx for sharing...Peace Abel

Reviewed by Katryn Dougherty
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
LOL
cute, we even dared to go out to eat today, but we went to our favorite hard to find resteraunt, not quite as busy.

Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Doesn't it make you happy when you know you're the one who serves these wonderful children and their mothers?

I love this write very much, Karla!

~ Sandie Angel a.k.a. May Lu ~

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Aww you are a beaut, best soak them feet, lest you become de-feeted:)

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Greetings.

Beautiful Poem Poet, Karla J. Dorman aka Aching feet.

I hope you have a well-rested wonderful evening, for You and Your delightful Sister, have earned IT and more! Thank You so much for sharing this with all of us. May You and Your Sister Poet, Karen Vidra aka The Texas Tornado, be served the best of everything this glorious world has to offer. Keep the faith! Excellent poem! I enjoyed tremendously!

My deepest respects and admiration to You both.

Thomas Lanechanger

Reviewed by Veronica Hosking
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
Karla,

This was a sweet mother's day poem. As one who has a 3 year-old who isn't at all happy today, I'm glad you were giving the flowers to the little ones. It's hard to remember why you're a mommy when your child throws a tantrum.

We love them anyways. :D Thanks for sharing.

Veronica

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
So sweet, they should also be honored to be served by you, Karla.

Reviewed on May 9, 2004
(((Karla)))

It WAS busy at the 'Ral; MAN, I thought I would NEVER get out of there or stop rolling! Ow, my poor aching shoulders and hands! Think I rolled them into oblivion! LOL

And YOU without a break for nine hours! YIKES!! LOL

But it WAS fun; glad it is OVER!! THANK GOD it's OVER!! We made it!

Wonderful poem, Karla; thanks for sharing this lighthearted look at the restaurant biz on the busiest day of the year!!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Happy Mother's day to you; you ARE a mom!!

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
LOL! Beautiful!

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on May 9, 2004
A cute way to give tribute. I feel sorry for your feet... lol.


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