wanted: extreme makeover (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 18, 2004

LOL
usually i say ........wish i wrote it, but in this case i can say.........I COULD HAVE WROTE IT!!! You just described me.......ALMost to a T!!

ADORABLE, WITTY, FUN.......and so very YOU!!!!!!!
pax......A

Reviewed by andrea coltman

Reviewed on May 18, 2004

Great write Karla,... getting older has it's plus sides too (when I know what they are I'll let you know!!!)...best wishes Andrea

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 18, 2004

You are a Hoot Poet!!! Its what on the inside that really counts!!! Great write!!!

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on May 18, 2004

I have always been looking for a way to avoid wrinkles on my face and I found out that it was not possible while staying on earth. In space, people do not age much. So Karla, shall we go. Excellent poem

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

it's what comes from the heart that matters ...

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

HEllo,.,,,, SMILEs its not that bad sweetie.....

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Heheheheh....know the feeeeeeeeling!!

Enjoyed this very much Karla....my body might give...but my head will always be young!!Thighs or no thighs.....I call them "Passionhandles"

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Karla:

I enjoyed this write...
GOd Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Better to get old and gray, than to have the other alternative...

Yound and blond, tits to die for, and thighs not even ready for child bearing, just for keeping in the air...

HOpe you get thru your makeover, I do know a good carpenter and facelifter if you need one...LOL! Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Cute write. Thanks for the laugh.

Reviewed by Xian Horn

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

You always have a positive attitude even in self-deprecation.The external's easy to make over. It's you're warm heart that counts and that's the last thing anyone can work on. Good for you!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

LOL! hahaha Karla, great write, love the humor!
You have lots of company!;-)Anyway, you are still
beautiful in the places I look which is your heart
and soul, the only real place that counts!

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Ha ha...This was so funny Karla, I know what you mean!

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

HO HO! Don't feel bad, Karla, As you said, at least you are getting older.
But don't we all wish we got a makeover as we age. But, between you and me, I don't mind looking like Rover at all - neither do my dogs mind, but the Mrs. still keeps harpin about my haircuts.

I actually plan to become - The Shaggy Dog!!

Reviewed by John Banasiewicz Jr

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

This was funny and got me laughing as I started to think about an extreme make over here for me.. would take more than 7 days to me for sure,,
thanks for my daily laugh here
Tommy

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Great funny write, but distinguished looking is the word....

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

(((Karla)))

This is absolutely HILARIOUS! But we ALL have things we don't like about ourselves; too bad the "Extreme Makeover: Home Edition" can't remodel our bodies like they do homes...that'd be GREAT! Cute write; enjoyed it (and enjoy the show and YOU!)! (I love you just the way you are; in my eyes, you DON'T need any remodeling!!)

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on May 17, 2004

Oh,Karla! How Cute!
I love it! Thanks for
past reviews!