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Help Meeeeeeeee
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Ah, the trials and tribulations of being a Poet! :-) *Hee Hee*


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"HELP MEEEEEEEEEE"
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Help me find that magic place,
That place where poems dwell,
Help me find the words to use,
That ring louder than a bell,
~~
Help me find that special spark,
That makes someone's thoughts stand out,
Help me find the words to use,
That brings a poem about,
~~
Help me find the highest heights,
Take me from the valley floor,
Help me find the words to use,
Words I've never seen before,
~~
Help me to achieve my dream,
Of seeing my words in print,
Help me find the words to use,
Can you give me a small hint,
~~
Never mind, my Muse is here,
Thought she went down with the ship,
Don't take off like that again!
I was just about to flip!
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
(C) Copy written, 20 September, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Help Meeeeeeeee"
Reviewed by Safi Abdi
Reviewed on September 23, 2004
Creative!

Safi

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Totally cute poem that we can all identify with!

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 21, 2004
Most excellent!

Becca

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Karla,
Awesome this one is excellent ....

LP

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Glad you did not flip...imagine what words could come out of that???

hehehehehehe!!

Very creative Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
you seem to have helped yourself just fine ...

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Honey you don't need any help, it's the rest of the world that needs help. You know exactly what to do, God and your Muse are with you, and that's a tough tag team to defeat!
blessin's and ((HUGS)) to you over and over,
cynth'ya lewis reed

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
I could really identify with that frantic feeling we poets get when the muse takes off... and got a laugh out of the carefree, oh, I've gotta go write now, she's back attitude at the end! Dawn

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
LOL loved the spin at the end :-)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004
I think you have found your Muse's place...
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Karla, I can definately feel the what you are saying in this great poem.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Karla you have a forever muse,and your writing improves with each poem!Love it!;-)

Reviewed by Mari Laureano (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
lol..I think everyone can relate to this! great poem...

love&light,
**Mari**

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
You sure have a clever way of bringing that Muse back!
I sure liked this one.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Very a-muse-ing.. gotta love this one..

Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Hi Karla:

Your are so talented, you will never be short of words. Your muse is pushing you to write.

Sandie May Angel

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
aahhhhhhhhhhhhh
such talent........looking for help??? lady...you can give it.....u got the rhyme all the time.....and the joy of writing along with it, it shows in your humor and style..........your not a trip......your a holiday!!!
Anita :)

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
"Never mind, my Muse is here,
Thought she went down with the ship,
Don't take off like that again!
I was just about to flip!"

Cute write, Karla. Thanks for the laugh.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Okay you flipped, now if you need help flipping back, I can help there but my muse has eluded me today as well, can't help you with that...Peace as always, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Surprise!

suwb

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
Wow...You have got the Muse , Karla..
Love and Hugs..
Peter

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
I think you just did it, Karla. Now you want help with... what?

Hugs,
Carmen :-)

Reviewed on September 20, 2004
(((Karla)))

This is absolutely aDORable! Love your sense of humor! May your muse never abandon you; you are really soaring with your writings! Keep up the great job you are already doing! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Donna Quesinberry
Reviewed on September 20, 2004
really cute

d.


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