Senryu: Ahhhhh-Chooo (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

Ah, poor thing, sweet Karla...

I do not have this particular malady... BUT... am most sympathetic as family members do.

Oh, how you pack a punch with brevity... no beating around the bush (oops... hope you're not allergic to those too! hehe) Be well, dear poet pal... katy xox

Reviewed by Muhammad Al Mahdi

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

What lovely! But it's true. A love this poem of yours.

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

perfect spring write...

Hugs, Carole

Reviewed by Patrick McCormick

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

Keep the cleenex handy Karla.

Pat

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

Stock those meds! Nice.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 19, 2005

Awwwwww thank God for little miracles...I do not have any Allergies....only towards alcohol....and only when missused!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

Oh I just love how it is you people from Texas get to rub it in that spring is in the air and it is warm and like that and we still have some more winter to contend with...yeah I hope your allergies are kickin', at least you can go out without a coat...LOL! ed

Reviewed by Barbara Terry

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

OMG sis I used have such bad hayfever, and my eyes just watered, and I sneezed pathetically. Since I have been in transition now, fianlly, for good, my alergies don't flare up any more. the only sneezing I do now, is if it is too smokey in a room, or there is a particle of dust that got loose. Nicely writtten by a more nicer person. Thnx for sharing sis. may the Lord be with you alays, and at your side constantly. With much love in my heart, joy to the world, peace on earth, & (((HUGS))), Barbie

"If I have to...Then I may as well be."

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

Cute but meaningful, Karla. I grew up a sick child and had huge allergies until my early twenties when all started to disappear. I wish the same for all sufferers out there. Thank you for this. Amour et paix � toi. Ton ami de la C-B, Canada. R�gis

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

You nailed it with this, Karla. I only have a few allergies, but when they strike, I am miserable.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

Boy do I know it! I stay stocked up on the allergy pills! And the pollen just covers my car. Good write!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

Love your senryu Karla right on target!

My nose wears a kleenex well, visine gets rich,and I get to itch;-)
etw

Reviewed by Edwin Larson

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

So true...even the picture makes me want to sneeze..:)

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

I've battled allergies for a number of years, but I'll live with them, to see everything come alive again...

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

A great time of year. But spoiled for the poor sufferers.
Love the light heartness here..

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

Spring is truly my favorite time of year - but I don't suffer from allergies - so I guess I can afford to truly love it - but I can see why some might not, Karla.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

(((Karla)))

Did you write this with ME in mind??...

Maybe that is why I have been miserable lately...STUPID allergies and sinuses...ARGGGHHHH!!! Cute write; very well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

Oh my and mine are acting up but I planted gladiolas today in my flower box. I love those flowers and the bulbs were healthy. I am now staying away from black mold in buildings around here.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 18, 2005

Very true great Senryu
God Bless
Michelle!