Troubles (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by John Martin

Reviewed on July 12, 2005

You have captured the essence of writing, a most difficult thing to do. Very, very nice job.

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

Great job! I'm laughing at the dog's picture and enjoying this delightful poem. Thanks!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

Your unique style and creativity shine in this write, Karla. Merci. Amour et paix. Ton ami de la C-B, Canada. R�gis

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

Karla, I hope you get the opportunity to "show" these poems to the world, perform them even at readings. You have such a unique blend of humor and wisdom. A fabulous write!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

Another enchanting write Karla, you do these so well!

Peace, Carole

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

(((Karla)))

Spent some time at Louie Sandusky's house lately, hmmmmm??? LOL

Wonderfully delightful write, love the metaphoric comparison in this clever poem! Very well done; brava!! Take a bow; you have earned it!! BRAVA, poet laureate!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

Great write...know the feeling mind does the CHA-CHA!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

This is absolutely amazing in its unique set up. You, author have command of your words in the most humorous way! I bow to the great pen!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

Yet another whimsical magical write, Karla!

Reviewed by Roger Ochs

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

Wonderful use of repetition and playfulness.

Reviewed by Trish - The Trickster

Reviewed on June 18, 2005

Karla, you have just made my morning :). This is wonderful. Have a great weekend.

Hugs, Trish

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2005

Very fun!!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 17, 2005

Karla this will be one of my favorites to keep, you really cooked this one on all burners! Beautifully conceived and written!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on June 17, 2005

I love the pic, and the poem even more
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 17, 2005

the war of words just runs us down sometimes ... when we surrender to them they seem to come out of nowhere ...

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 17, 2005

Fantastic write and the ending is so appropriate. LOL

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 17, 2005

Well if they end up jumping into place as well as they did in this poem I think you have nothing to fear, they know where they should be. Good write Karla.

Felix

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on June 17, 2005

Hell yeah, take a swig, light up a cig and chill out, babe, know-whot-I-mean?